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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Thats pretty dope son. Not lovin the background so much, but the letters and color scheme are on point.
     
  2. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    only letter i'm not feeling is the D. i would have made it look more rounded like the O.
     
  3. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  4. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Some black book shit

    Solrac
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    PRS
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    Attempting to make the letters look lifely lol
     
  5. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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    sum jibba jabba wit pens :)
    View attachment 563544
    mogan-1st one is nuce...loose the eyes on the 2nd one
    weaks-make the ''s'' a little bit cleaner....and work on your structure
    zoner and wgone props


    crit meh nao
     
  6. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    could use some more arrows.
    Mogan that solrac is nice.
     
  7. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Thanks bro but the Eyes where the whole point in me doing that piece lol... The letterstructures suck I just wanted to see if I was capable of working the eyes into it.... Nice piece btw
     
  8. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Bilnek. The letters need the most work. Which until you have those down you shouldnt be doing any extensions. The background doesnt look horrible, but like I said, until you have the letters down pact everything else is pointless.
     
  9. idk401

    idk401 Senior Member

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  10. massacreman

    massacreman Elite Member

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    skey, good job, you actually listened to your crits, not alot people do that on this forum.
    really good job,keep it up
    if i were you id fix the cut in the upper bars of the Y and make the Y flow more with the other letters, they are bending like this (((| get it?
     
  11. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    also Skey, i would move the E a bit more out to the right, it almost looks like an F.
     
  12. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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  13. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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  14. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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  15. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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  16. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    do simples...nothing else.
     
  17. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    no. as you can see from what he just posted he can do simples. simples are just to learn structure. if you do nothing but simples your never gunna progress. keep working at that style you were working with. the only way to develope a style is trial and error. some things work somethings dont. you wont figure out what works if you just stick to simples.
     
  18. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    well from what people told me a few pages back. simples are what u should do to make ur structure better.
     
  19. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    *highfive*

    i dont really bother posting reality/counter argument like that anymore since it never leads anywhere buts its nice when people like atesk say watsup.
     
  20. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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    yeah but once you learn it, start doing things alittle more complex, and a little more and a little more till you get to the top.