U's X's V's are tricky, I's O/Q's and T's are a pretty hard to add steeze unless u repeat some aesthetic you've seen before and pretty much adapt but its hard to make your own unique original version of them letters
almost looks like 'clowny' ...... the arrow and underline gotta go.. try capital letters first mayn, it might look mo fresha
3fnk: less drips, more flow please. Clown: lose the arrow, and create more space inbetween the letters My tag just doesnt seem to be right.
I like it massacre except for the triangle O and the left side of the R Make the B touch the bottom bare
idk what you think is wrong with it. i really like this for some reason. id make the E a tad bit bigger tho.
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looks alot like this guys handy b not sayin ur biting jus saying. http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/04202005174812DSCN0167.JPG&imgrefurl=http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php%3Fartist_id%3D2940&usg=__1KO3fukVsv4EfRBpVZnkE3qoI2Y=&h=450&w=600&sz=64&hl=en&start=2&um=1&itbs=1&tbnid=rgp7IcZJLRM_cM:&tbnh=101&tbnw=135&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dbare%2BITD%2Bgraffiti%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DG%26tbs%3Disch:1
The S and E are your strongest letters. The K is the worst. Don't pull the middle line of your A across your S like that. just keep working at it.