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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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  2. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    The rest of my letters where all taller then the S and Q so i just threw it under there to just make the proportion of the piece match up.
     
  3. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    random sketch i got into while my ps3 was updating
    lots of flaws but it was just a quick little simp to break away from my boring old letters for a sec
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    squint that shits come a looooong way man, its looking real nice now

    alts allways nice to see what you've been up too, that uncoloured sketch inspired me

    clout you have some solid simples man, a real nice place to work from. more so the battle sketches. you should push it a little farther and maybe add a few breaks and maybe an extension or two? looks good though
     
  4. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    it was the heat of the moment it was 7 15 in the mornin n like 90 degrees and plus i cant stand little faggots on this site but its all good
    ima jus have to ground him tonight when i go see his sexy ass mom but shes a heroin addict =/
     
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  5. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    listening to this song (im addicted to) as i saw you sketch. they fit perfectly http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xo5AoDz33U4

    loookn tight bud. only thing that doesnt really fit is the tiny extendor or break at the end of the first e
     
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  6. dave the pirate

    dave the pirate Senior Member

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  7. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Yo Blunt NO Beef man, I can see progress but not a lot. To me it seems like your progressing but super slowly...I dont know why tho, might just be me man. But yo check it I know some ppl who have been rockin the same outlines for ever and their shit is MAD CLEAN bro. But yo keep at it peace

    Aever....I like that man its somethin different it reminds me of Augor just cause of the
     
  8. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    word ya well i think what people dont understand on this website is because your sketch is sloppy or you letters aint the best but once again these are prolly the kids who dont paint a single thing besides their school bathrooms with deco markers but anyways back to my point....even tho you might not have some crazy wild style but you can rock solid thick simps which i love and if you actually can paint and have some dope can control you can make that simp look like some saber shit.....but people aint to smart on here so that shit just gets me heated na mean but its all good nikkas
    and that last peice with all the extensions n shit was pretty new to me...i stick to nice solid rockers usually
    but still kills can lick my dick with his momzzzz
     
  9. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  10. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    ^^sick

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    welly ass coloring. was going to go all out for fun then realized how bleedy sketch paper is compared to the proper stuff. pretty wack all in all.

    okae -minus most of the junk and keep going with it. O reminds me of alts. (ps. i hate those colours. not that it matters)
    tez - perfect post to prove what blunt was saying
     
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  11. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    yer Z looks sort of like an L to me.
     
  12. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    ^agreed. the I is too wide also.
     
  13. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    ^agreed

    and

    ^also agreed. that or the E isnt wide enough.

    spacing increases towards the end. got some shit to do but ill repost later on.

    appreciate the crits gents.
     
  14. dave the pirate

    dave the pirate Senior Member

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    yo can i get som crits on my peice above, theres not many writers where i reside and id like som feed back ight 1
     
  15. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    okae you got some decent shit but the letter are lackin...you got decent can control tho you 3D is off ina couple spots but besides that its straight son
    also the color scheme is kinda yucky...big turn off to me anyways
     
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  16. dave the pirate

    dave the pirate Senior Member

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    thanks yo, yeah it turned out differnt from the sketch just started flowning, i noticed the 3d was off too theres always next time, This was my 3rd peice ever painted so ima keep knockin em out ight peace
     
  17. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Scream - your fuzzy letters are fucking amazing
    Tezer- Looks so sick

    This page is going pretty well... Hope I dont mess it up.
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  18. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    squint - hard working my man. top portion of S is weird with no gap at all. and T looks a little out of place with the amount of space you give the bars. but thats a tough letter combo to work with. keep going.

    feeling what aever had and alts and tez with the drips. forgot how gay 3-d is especially to keep a consistent 2-tone freehanding. no excuses though.

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  19. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    deff keep fuckin with it shits straight, but your 3d is kinda off
     
  20. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    squint i like ur shit but the only thing that bugs me is your letters seem to flow the same way a throwie would.....i mean if you where to round off some corners it could easily turn into a throw....its hard to explain but its still good non the less maybe try thinking about the negative space as well as the positive space