Haha blast, "I dont paint chill walls, only fame spots"...get over yourself.

Squint - Thats pretty fresh, I like the change in the S you made.
Here - I like where youre going man.
Safe - Id say get your letters up before putting shit up everywhere. You wont regret it.

 

hey safe, your bottom s is uneven, change that to a normal s, the faces in the letters are wierd, dont do faces unless you do them seperatley next to the peice or throw, horrible choice of colors on the first one, use a better blue, also your letters are very unappealling to look at, change them to more solid letters, no offense but honestly those look wimpy, they dont look hard at all peace

squint up your colors homie, your better than blast but not by much, id say get a new style, your current one is weak no pun intended, and on the topic of your painting, i would say you need some serious practice with coverage when you paint becuase from what i see thats not the concrete thats you half assing, no offence, other than that interesting concept.

 

bottom one. The S looks weird bc the wall is curved and is rocky so it only looks like that bc of the angle that they photo was taken in relation with the rock where that S is. There is no face in any letters. It's an Eyeball. That's pretty obvious and isn't anything abnormal since it has been a million times before.

As for the blue? psh. go paint. And as for wimpy? thats your opinion and an opinion is like an asshole, everyone has one. IMO the letters are curvy which is a style that i don't rock much but i want to look back at bc i used to do it. Yet im improving and that's all im happy about. your crits did nothing to help me except saying use a better blue. You can get me a good one if you want.

 

Bump this. Big ups.

Real *****s do real shit.

 

You're wearing that phrase out harder than your "They see me trollin'..." picture.

 

Bout fuckin time I see some REAL G shiit. A round of applause for this motha fucka right here!! Talk about some real shiit, Now THATS how you get up and this dude has some clean hands and some nice colors. G shiit dude stay up.

 

Deal with it, pussy.

 

any crits for give?

 

from the spots u paint omen and the way u paint id say ur a kid whos not interested in getting up but would rather drop burners....to each their own but i personaly think everyone needs to get the fuk up before they start dropping peices and burners. You got learn to walk before u can run, o yeah and simplefy your shit alota ur extensions and and randoms coloured fills make ur shit look worse

 

your f`s do kind of look like limp dicks..by which i mean that i would especially in the black blue , do a straight top bar f , also s a do push stronly forward and the f is just blockin , leaning in comlpete opposite direction,
second one you have like two straight tops n two round tops which does look wired too...i like the eyed e. hahah no beef...

 

my last cap exploded on the forefield
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thanks i will work on makein it simple and i aint a kid i have put my work in and i am up just cuz i dont post a thhousand handies on here it is a bomb peice thread thats why i am askin for crits on my bombs/ peice get it

 

bump
good stuff, just needa work on that R. maybe make the rounded part bigger and have the leg be shorter or something.

 

YO

This looks good bro keep up the good work man...

 

Kind of suck painting but I'm getting better
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i know its toy .. but advice helps

 

the Y looks like a V
the A needs to be re designed
and the P shouldnt be leaning out like that

 

thanks ill work with it , i kinda want the y like that, and the p needs the most work

 

then you may as well write vap