nothin to crit really. i agree with most things said on this page



i cant get a decent e to fit with the rest of the letters.

 

you could rock a lowercase E on that type of sketch cuz the tops are all smooth an circle like, like the top of an E ya know? either that or seperate the spines of the P an R to define where they are and it would suit the E much better

 

Yea i agree with guy the e needs to be get closer..but yea i could tell it was a quick sketch and stupid mistakes like that happen so dont sweat it,i appreciate for taking your time to do that..im gonna tweak my letters on what i posted last and ima proceed to sketching out what clout did

cyto - yo dont do all that crazy shit inside your letters and focus on what has been talked about these last few pages,its all about proportions,widths,heights,bars,and most important style,but style doesnt mean a crazy backround and random add on's,just keep it neat and simple for now.

 

yes! and no at the same time. The first one is the best one, but the black lines that come off in every direction look like you went for the 3d drop effect but couldn't decide which way you wanted it, so it throws of the perspective. The paint scheme good though.

The second one is the one that is the worst. You obviously can do way better since the other two are good. the letters themselves are really weak in some spots, and by adding multiple lines on the same letter, it makes it look even weaker since it deemphasizes the actual shape of the letters. and im not a fan of that paint job.

I can clearly see the look that you were going for with the last one. But once again, the perspective is off and that makes the letters look really weak. It has a lot of style to it, just not executed properly.

overall I think they are good and you show a lot of potential. you have a clear direction that you are going in and you understand the basics like "keepin the letters the same size". keep at it

 

Yo Tofe,I'll do an simple exchange for you later.

 

I don't really Like how the E leans so much at the end. But still it's starting to get better!

 

cyto- at first it looks sick, but if you break it down the letters are lacking. its not bad though, just work on letter structure instead of add ons and such. the style sorta reminds me of some tenser piece i saw somewhere

 

thanks everyone!

asper- looks much better with lowercase e

and heres more tinkering with one of the sketches



I've just been smoking hash and busting shit out today

 

asper - i think a thicker outline could make it look better

cyto - i like that trippy robotic shit..just the widths of the bars going big and small like for example look at the letter s..it just kills it..but overall it looks nice,just focus on doing simple stuff

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i was hyper as fuck when i did this peice,i should have just left it black n white;fuck it

 

OH GOD!... oh wait just read what you said last. you got it on point street meth and graff dont mix, id keep spraypaint outta your BB too.

 

i was really hyper idk wtf is wrong with me today but im good now ima sketch something else right after im finished smoking

 

TOFE- E needs to be straight like the rest other than that it looks good





I fucked up the R

 

Yo Deser Nice style man

 

id not overlap just one e..the black one looks better but why you do exactly the same shit twice? oh and first e is really streched copmpared to second also the extension on the bottom first e is ugly so are the "wings on leg of r...and in general youve a really edgy style like no curves except the ees..you might wanna try n change em up all edgy n see how it turns out...

 

its the same pic. in negative

 

tofe- gettin better, dont like the e tho

deser- s is the best letter. change the e's







i changed the r to a k cause it sounds better

 

Obvious 13 yearold is obvious

 

last K is best K

overall pieces are dope