dont cut your letters off like that Tofe, im talking about the T's meh the handy is simple, just dont slant it. same with the sketch too heres a sketch i did today in my classes, just for all the talking this week. crits? i dont like the S.
kilts and stot are pretty simple not gonna lie. instead of telling me to go simple why dont you give tips on how to progress my style? just a thought cause you have to eventually try new things, it wont help with people just telling you not to. not bitchin, just sayin
He gave you criticism to progress your style. Go simpler. It'll be the most productive thing you can do right now. I'd recommend bending your letters like < instead of like > if you're flowing that way. That S is hideous though. Keep at it. You'll get there.
@Kilts: Nice man, but i'm not really feeling it, but keep on trying because practice makes perfect. @Stayr: Plus is perfect but you need to try more simpler, try making the U alittle more like a U because from my POV it sorta looks like a L, Your S could use alot of work too. i'm just not diggin it from ya brotha. but i'll hook you up, check your inbox in a few. @Stot: are you serious? LOL. _______________ My 1st time doing a SIMPLE FOR ONCE. so it may not be straight, crits?
that y is wierd,dont like the bar sticking up the r and the one sticking to the left with the y,and its really skinny in that one part..a black shadow would have been better ..from worst to best... [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3340.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3335.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3338.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3336.jpg
ya truu, but I wanted it to match the bottom, cause if its curve, curve, straight, curve, then I didnt think it would match, but hey it's my 1st time doing shiet like this
I saw this http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3334.jpg and i thought it was you when it was really flippinchickens. @Tofe: keep it up man, last time you were shit but this time it's sorta better. F is sorta weird, also same thing with the E.
To be honest, that K doesn't look like a K at all. More like a down syndrome X. The rest of the letters have potential. Lose that K, like.. yesterday.
Can I just say, I like how you attempt to switch up some of the style/s of your letters. However, you always stay consistent with that T. Personally speaking ( which you may not like it ) that T fucks up the possibilities on a majority of your sketches/ pieces whatever. The fact that you have these bars coming in odd directions off of the foundation of a lowercase T make it look like a mess. I would say, stop making the lowercase T with all that shit on it. 100 times. Break out of that cycle, because as much as you may like it.. it just doesn't fit with all of it. Just saying.
kiltz- All I can say is whats been said. Tofe- I think that looks dope. [Broken External Image]:http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/2985/img0401te.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3531/img0403rg.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9369/img0404zc.jpg hella fucked up that e.
are you talkin facebook inbox or on here man? i dont have an inbox on either account. Thanks for the crits though, i made the U to match the L on purpose. The only letter i really like in this is the P. ive been testing it out alot the past bit and just finally fit it into a sketch. trying to get a style to match it
This shit count as black book? [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5486/016cc.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6976/009bl.jpg