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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    dont cut your letters off like that Tofe, im talking about the T's
    meh the handy is simple, just dont slant it.
    same with the sketch too

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    heres a sketch i did today in my classes, just for all the talking this week.
    crits? i dont like the S.
     
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  2. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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    everyone on this page should go SIMPLER!
     
  3. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    kilts and stot are pretty simple not gonna lie. instead of telling me to go simple why dont you give tips on how to progress my style? just a thought cause you have to eventually try new things, it wont help with people just telling you not to.

    not bitchin, just sayin
     
  4. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    He gave you criticism to progress your style. Go simpler. It'll be the most productive thing you can do right now.

    I'd recommend bending your letters like < instead of like > if you're flowing that way. That S is hideous though. Keep at it. You'll get there.
     
  5. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    yeah the S didnt come out like i wanted it to at all, thanks tho.
     
  6. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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  7. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    @Kilts: Nice man, but i'm not really feeling it, but keep on trying because practice makes perfect.

    @Stayr: Plus is perfect :p but you need to try more simpler, try making the U alittle more like a U because from my POV it sorta looks like a L, Your S could use alot of work too. i'm just not diggin it from ya brotha. but i'll hook you up, check your inbox in a few.

    @Stot: are you serious? LOL.

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    My 1st time doing a SIMPLE FOR ONCE. so it may not be straight,

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    crits?
     
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  8. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    that y is wierd,dont like the bar sticking up the r and the one sticking to the left with the y,and its really skinny in that one part..a black shadow would have been better


    ..from worst to best...



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  9. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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    ya truu, but I wanted it to match the bottom, cause if its curve, curve, straight, curve, then I didnt think it would match, but hey it's my 1st time doing shiet like this :p
     
  10. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    at?
     
  11. flask1995

    flask1995 Senior Member

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  12. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    oh lol.
    yea im better than that :p
     
  13. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    To be honest, that K doesn't look like a K at all. More like a down syndrome X. The rest of the letters have potential. Lose that K, like.. yesterday.
     
  14. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    Can I just say, I like how you attempt to switch up some of the style/s of your letters. However, you always stay consistent with that T. Personally speaking ( which you may not like it ) that T fucks up the possibilities on a majority of your sketches/ pieces whatever. The fact that you have these bars coming in odd directions off of the foundation of a lowercase T make it look like a mess. I would say, stop making the lowercase T with all that shit on it. 100 times. Break out of that cycle, because as much as you may like it.. it just doesn't fit with all of it.
    Just saying.
     
  15. ||BREAD||

    ||BREAD|| Elite Member

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  17. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    are you talkin facebook inbox or on here man? i dont have an inbox on either account. Thanks for the crits though, i made the U to match the L on purpose. The only letter i really like in this is the P. ive been testing it out alot the past bit and just finally fit it into a sketch. trying to get a style to match it
     
  18. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    key bored lattersss
    use stright bars for now till you get the bending them part down
     
  19. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    Emane what the fuck is up with that second E it looks like a Q and that M looks like an R
     
  20. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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