rewt, your letters are good an you got heart. so keep with it homie an good shit will come your way. just try an keep the ego in check cuz its always the one thing that fucks a good writer over

mines fucked me over many times, one of the hardest things about graff.

emba, try an thickenin them real thin bars. especially in the middle of the A itll sharpen the whole thing up

 

rewt i like the green what color is that?

 

REWT you're looking good man, not to far from some of the dope simples. You actually sketch anything more intricate?

EMBA 2nd one is way more fire, that just cause I like the colorz though haha

ZEWL work on the L man

 

that green rewt freight looks dope. nice color scheme's too emba, id just thicken certain bars IMHO, but hey thats just me.

Some older flicks from developing these letters freestyle..










<3needle caps. crits will get crits

 

Toyz Are Lame.

 

And needle caps suck.

 

The beginning of this is all needle caps up until the billboard...they dont suck if you know how to use them..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yuF9nIm8fAU

 

dosent look like you do

 

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I ran out of black paint, and didn't even have any white to put shine on it. The yellow& green in the background isn't mine
The E is huge and the S is messed up. The C is too thin. Letter spacing off between C and A. Hit me with any other crits. Didn't have enough black to do 3d


Scone, your N's look like R's, and the small lifted O doesn't look right.
Astrob, where's your stuff posted at before you talk shit?
Zewl- make all your letters either all straight, or all curvy, or else your style doesnt look right.
Rewt, your shit's progressing fast, haha glad to see a non ronchy fill for once! only crit for the green one on the train is that your 3d is off at the top between the E and the W.

 

the drip on your U makes it look like an N or an H. took me a second. make your lines straighter

 

you need a blurrier image , thats way to crisp

 

what could i do to make it better

 

why are you reposting those?

 

my bad lol , i hit the wrong ones , but any advice on these?

 

Points for can control. Minus points for lame letters with maaaaad lean.

 

yeah, the same advice i gave you last time you posted these. change the A, tweak the Y, and fix the P. and dont make them lean in the middle. thats kinda weird.....

 

Word. True story.

Juice Green by Molotow.

Nothing much more intricate than what I'm painting right now. ADHD makes it tough to sketch for a while.

I dig this.

 

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crits?