newish flick, month or so old View attachment 566841 did this at my mums place today View attachment 566842 i know i need to make the bottom leg of the E extend further to the right. atesk-i thought it said lost at first, your E is a bit squased there imo.
bored not done will be in a minute gonna say slot.er or slotr View attachment 566876 View attachment 566877
it's a hell of a lot better than anything you can do. try harder. keep doing what your doing messer. i'm diggin the style. destil- I'm feeling it. that D goes hard. i wanna see more.
so why would you say it isnt working? she must be doing something right. anyways. attempt number 2. changed a few things. [Broken External Image]:http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4811/getattachmentlester.jpg still is a bit cramped at the begining and the T has too much space...and the T is mad ugly. i'm having difficulty getting the spacing right for this style. more practice i guess.
Okay, Atesk-The E and the S need to be more tall and follow the postures of the L. The letter breaks are kinda distracting and the T is to stretched out. I see how your trying to mirror the L shape with it but thats not really working, It needs more flow and repition in letter forms. It looks really nice but thats just what i see when i really try to give it harsh crits, Put a nice drop shadow on that instead of a vanishing point. Hows this S K U connection?
squint, dunno what to say to the connection...you sinmply connected em, wonder why you didnt connect all the letters that way,s and leg of k is not really suiting the style,in parts too thin n round compared to the uint..u has lots of dead space..mmh you could use two diff style for a sk - unit kinda pun thing.. wreks, i dont like how your using w as r backbone , id do k kinda like the r with a long leg and the short one bend to the left aswell, and last step is the get all the letters the same size. e really sticks out, too fat . watfe why the hell do people show their stupid faces on here...
Claaaaaassy. I know that's you, though, Catterack. I don't dig how the right part of the K isn't connected, while the rest stays together, it kind of fucks up the flow.