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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. MadZilla

    MadZilla Member

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    yo dawg, get this dude a spell check
    look like his words are spillin out his damn neck
    sliced open vertically
    spellin so bad, my eyes scream murder me
    now i dont mean to hate
    your rhymes are like when you masturbate
    -keep em to yourself
    its bad for other *****s health
    it aint sick, its viral
    all your capital O's shit is givin me some spirals
    -im spinnin
    my head cant handle what youre givin
    its like your rap game came and went
    then you didnt realize when your verbal technique was spent

    look, i lied
    i do mean to hate
    and i can tell your fate
    youll prolly come back with some more shit thats wack
    tellin us somethin how you did a bitch from the back
    but most of us are wiser - we know a fictitious ass liar
     
  2. 1stGu32.wh0?

    1stGu32.wh0? Senior Member

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    ha ikil it
    gOt haters On the dik again sO itreat em like they pussy an leave they pussys drilt quik
    ifilt it up wit sum shit dat yu wuld define as de ilnes
    kuz ipOurt my handl Of erk an jerk ntwO her cavity an nOw mOmy has a filn
    ha yu kids ar krazy think yu kan kOmpete wit the denver city villian
    im sumthn like the realnes an yuz ar sumthn that iaint feeln
    kuz yur shit aint anywhere klOse twO anything thats apealn
    like a fatbitch wit nO features Or a crakhead wit nO ceilns
    my flOws fukt up n da head like stealn a bums matres, tOes an fingers plus his cavity filns
    wtf yu gOt twO say nOw trik wit yur blasphemy writens
    while im spitn my nynjas pasn me stars an ask me am ihitn
    iaint quitn nOt netime sOon sO ikeep harasn these kitens
    kuz the wifey likes twO eat cat while getn it 4rm the bak sO the pasiOns 4givn
    aha alday trik
    `mileHiest.One
     
  3. Hopeoner

    Hopeoner Member

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    I have to kind of explain this one for some people... DMT is a chemical produced by your brain during REM sleep and has been hypothetically linked to the visual aspects of dreaming. One day I had a dream I was seeing trough my eyes watching myself sliding down the street. Not to long after I got clipped by a truck trailer and saw the exact thing (first day of high school senior year by the way). I decided to write a rap about it. Any way here we go...


    1 I'd liked to tell you about DMT
    2 And the effect it's had on me
    3 On august 24 I was hit by a car
    4 Clipped by the shin and thrown afar
    5 I slid down the road bout' 40 feet
    6 Saw the world from a different seat
    7 Couldn't believe what I saw through my eyes
    8 But it comforted me once I realized
    9 I saw this in a dream, not to long ago
    10 My body was going fast, but my mind was going slow
    11 I was chill, in the back of my head
    12 Watching my body slide like a sled
    13 Then i stopped and sat up to see
    14 My foot wasn't vertical with my knee
    15 Right then, i started to feel the pain
    16 It was like a shock wave sent to my brain
    17 That's when, i started to think about how my last moments in life would be spent
    18 When i saw a paramedic and a cop like heaven's sent

    I haven't decided how i want to end it though. After line 12 I had this to end it..
    There was nothin' i could do and no place to hide
    So i said fuck it man, just enjoy the ride...
     
    Last edited: Apr 30, 2010
  4. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    1st guess... im sorry but your a fuckin tool man.
    and for the sake of the thread your also a fool, man
     
  5. Baron

    Baron Moderator

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  6. kid_leser

    kid_leser Member

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    now, i stay strapped,
    wit a can nd a fat cap,
    trollin tha streets wit muh face masked,
    all black hoodie wit a fitted cap,
    couple reds nd a flat black,
    killin these streets like a heart attack,
    come at muh squad nd get ur lid cracked,
    come at me i strike fast,
    ull have somethin hot comin at ya ass,
    but im tired now,all outta gas,
    get at me nikka, sincerly kash
     
  7. Hopeoner

    Hopeoner Member

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    About the weatherman.

    I woke up this morning and almost cried
    because overnight it had snowed outside
    so I grabbed my keys and went out to my ride
    and my steps were like a slip n' slide
    I flew in the air and almost died
    that son of a bitch weatherman must of lied
    cause im staring at my car and its covered in frost
    so either hes a dumbass or he must have been lost.
     
    Last edited: May 1, 2010
  8. 1stGu32.wh0?

    1stGu32.wh0? Senior Member

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    yal hav mOr bark den rOot beer
    the Only time yur evr pOpn bOtls is On new years
    the Only time yur evr talkn swalOw is wit twO queers
    i b the type twO walk a bitch Outa her panties an her twO ears
    yal dOnt understand me an yu dudes fear kOmpetitiOn kuz yal sum blue peers
    seein depresiOn while im kOnstantly prOgresin an hOnestly yal is jus shedn new tears
    yal need sum new mirOrs
    kan yu c yurself n myshOes
    i b the type twO letchu keep talkn up a stOrm while im drawin quik kina like hi nOon
    im alive, tOons..
    yal lOony
     
  9. KRE1

    KRE1 Guest

    hahahaha wut a nig nog. ^^
     
  10. Hopeoner

    Hopeoner Member

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    I really wish you would explain that capital O shit
    But i guess you do what you do however you see fit
    Replacing c's with k's like were in the Mortal Kombat
    Im thinkin your dyslexic cause theirs no other way to explain that
    Talkin poppin bottles i'd rather pop x
    Spend the night with your momma while your on here tryin to flex
    Sayin your better than any of these dudes
    Nobody wants to see themselves in your wack ass shoes...
     
  11. KidReny!

    KidReny! Senior Member

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    Donald duck goofie mickey mouse
    im gone hit you in yo fuckin mouth!!!!!!
     
  12. sacwacko

    sacwacko Elite Member

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    what the fuck donald duck, i wish youd hit me.
    ill leave u stuck on the floor, in your new shorts, shitting,
    catch u runnin amuck, shitty shorts you gotta be kidding
    kid reny, i wish u luck, shit, itsa pitty,
    i might fight some kids, but not little kitties,
    im not kidding, money... dont act funny, just gimme,
    paint and all, and then im dippin, hella quick,
    in fact its like the money that i get, hot box smokes hella thick,
    like my stack, wrapped, in my rubber band,
    spread in the case, put the money in my hand,
    this is my land, shit, go back to disneyland...
     
  13. DTE_PRONTO

    DTE_PRONTO Senior Member

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    no disrespect but if anybody a real graffiti artist tell everybody in a reply
    dont matter if u 4rm a graffiti crew or party crew but all i kno is toyz should die
    my rapz come harder than a dude goin 2 3rd base wita fuccin girl
    im nothin ta bein coceited but im welcomin wifey typez ta my world
    shoutoutz ta every 4rm tha eastcoast,dirty south,& westcoast cali
    im insane in tha membrane like cypress hill & im cruisin in a all white cadi
    outa all tha freestlyin i do i can make a dam graffiti hip hop well rap mix
    i dont wanta b a king yet im better off hittin & graffin up my own crewz like shit
     
  14. cheesegril

    cheesegril Elite Member

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    lay a kid out in the ditch witch one is it gonna be next i need my fix like a fish needs water your just a dead man walkin. you punk damn near split your wig with my action triple pump and your arm be bustin in half like a fuckin twig. i looked at your girl lookin more like a pig, but fuck it i hit the yard 10 o clock in the morning. the fuckin cellys pagin i got my homeboy kickity kiks talkin about some kids at the spot, heard they were dissin stock so i pulled out the hammer shit was about to get thick so i pulled up with my whip a 1999 honda civic hatchback seen that fuckin kid he was black also has a six pack broke his nose now hes no mo. i got his wallet bout to get a cash advance on this mother fuckers visa but my homegirl peaches giving me that page bout " meet me at the spot" i said im there already bitch pick up 4 cans of white and 2 cans of black shit needs to get crackalackin.

    went with this beat
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y-BnDEYANtg
     
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  15. KRE1

    KRE1 Guest

    Don’t give me the time of day
    Imma point the shotty and spray
    A buckshot wit salt from the verbal assault
    Leave yo body rottin in a bank vault
    After I dip wit the chips
    You, you don’t get a piece cuz of yo big lips
    Remember loose lips sink ships
    Your torpedo of lies need ta
    End wit u and die
    Snitches equal bitches
    Do that put a twist in ur britches
    I need a beat like a junkie need tha needle
    Your rhymes are childish and feeble
     
  16. beerlington

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    i dare you to test me, i stay twistin caps like pespi
    i drop it so hard, homies pass out like epilepsi
    hit me with your best shot, fire when ready
    you can prepare for battle, i'm cruisin steady, head high in the clouds from all the spliffs filled with headies. . .
     
  17. beerlington

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    And i don't want to make anyone feel like i feel like i have any remarkable talent to speak of, or anything like that, but that shit above my last post is straight whack. . . Just like the rest of the shit posted by that person. . . I just had to say that, i keep looking at it because it's above the shit that i posted. . . I don't normally do this 'freestyle rap forum' shit, but i decided to post something i had been fucking with. . . But it doesn't take a brain to notice whack shit like 'Snitches equal bitches
    Do that put a twist in ur britches
    I need a beat like a junkie need tha needle
    Your rhymes are childish and feeble'. . . . Balls.
     
  18. The crazy caucasian redux

    The crazy caucasian redux Member

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  19. KRE1

    KRE1 Guest

    oops. my bad. dint know you had a record contract. dint know you was crowned king of freestyle rapping. dint know your rhymes are just jawdropping. my.bad.
     
  20. KRE1

    KRE1 Guest

    i mean seriously, the fuk is your problem. if you think you better, post some shit thats better. god damn! i mean, twistin caps like pepsi? cmon fool thats weak as hell! hahaha i laugh at fools like you.

    if you got beef, spit it. dont complain. man, thats a bitch move.