Yes I am criticizing his letters. I've seen better letters by him but I am criticizing his letters in this battle. I like how the thread wraps around the letters. I vote for redeyes based on this battle what do you mean?
let me tell you its not just the z...your bending your letters in lotsa weird angles n stuff..but the worst part is that you didnt connect the b..oh and that you added all the stuff to your z..
ya i messed up alot... perspective isn't quite there...i didn't do a base sketch so i screwed up alot!!!like ALOT!!!
ok my computer got effed last friday got it fixed i will post my column sometime soon sry guys for goin ghost on that one
my first attempt at a battle [Broken External Image]:http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/3410/chad100001.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us
i vote for you on that battle anyway lol based on past works and the shitty entries that were in it....
Im sorry you all had to look at my m...I was thinkingf of a new m while outlining and effed it up completely. chad I really like the laser beam force field in your piece. The reason I ripped the paper out was because I spilled coke on part of the paper
u have good coloring skills and bad letter structure (like me!) ... i just cant make out a single letter in there.... to me it looks like it says 'bluse' or something... just go simpler and ur coloring skills will carry through and make stuff look better
Canal the piece is iight the color skeme perfect but i would like to know whats that random bar behind the Z ??
zook ur right...Letters would have been readable if I hadnt warped them enough to try and make them symmetrical. I should've used extensions, which I didnt want to use because I didnt want it to be simple letters or wildstyle, which both of my styles are pretty good...I guess I need to work on my simple wildstyle. Heres a pic with the letters how they were going to be if I hadnt use so many extensions... idk that random bar behind the z was my fail attempt to match the random bar that the B has. EDIT: I need to find a way to make the letters readable when I fill them in with colors......
not tryin to be a dick man but the letters werent readable when they didnt have color... u gotta work on structure more than anything... i do too so were in the same boat
[Broken External Image]:http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5245/june2010298.jpg lil late but had no computer , i'll try and get sumthin done for the bumz battle though , couldnt figure out how to turn it sry
use flickr... u can resize crop and rotate pics on there.... and yea u kilt it.... itd look way better with highlights though....... i might get in on this next one just cuz its a short word... if i get time... peace
was havin a hell of a time sketchin one for the bumz battle , so i grabbed a can instead and freestyled this , ran out of the green fill color , else i woulda changed the bottom hole in the b cause it's fucked , but i like the outcome...kinda. hey zook , just to pick your brain , what color would u do the highlights and where would u place them on the column piece? [Broken External Image]:http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/1644/june2010302.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...226452795_100000507545549_285889_659396_n.jpg 100% pure bum hehe