did you ever try a different e?? its top extension is not doin any good..clean as always, i like the b.
First time painting... View attachment 574237 View attachment 574238 Anyone wanna give me some crits?
That shit is clean as hell. Those cracks, the highlights.. that's sick man. I haven't been on in a minute, so it's good to see that. I agree about the E though, maybe try doing it with the top bar. Instead of the "Bend back bar" maybe make the top portion thicker to compensate? Seems like that's your comfort zone on it, but all in all I like it man.
Nickstix-That shits good, I like the simplicity Etcha-shits really clean man, I just don't believe in some of your letter structure
Cheers guys Yeah now i look at it the E does need work. Doesn't seem the same style as the rest of the letters. But i also think the overal letter structure is a bit weak on this one. The B is still my strongest letter. Will get working on it
REK not bad for ur first bomb... where the e overlaps the k should be the same thickness as the rest of the outline nawmean?... personally i woulda went with a capital E since the R and K are....... try a bubble letter throwup i wanna see what it looks like emba ur getting great at laying down the paint... however, i think ur 3d is suffering (inside of the B it doesnt follow the bar on the top or bottom, its missing inside the A and E... based on the bottom of ur E and A it should be on the bottom of the M and B too) what i think u should do next time u paint a piece is try to make the 3d the exact thickness of the bar its coming off of, itll just be way more convincing i think, like i said ur great at laying down paint, once u know exactly where to put it ur shits gonna be that much hotter... i know i can be a picky asshole but i try to help people with potential when i can, peace
I know my 3d on my dot overlaps my h .. just a dusty fill also but crits please... [Broken External Image]:http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0002-4.jpg
Work on proportions. Move the can faster on your final outline and your fill. Grimy fills are dope but that's awful. You could probably go arms length across from left to right to fill that throw. It doesn't look too big. It'll look grimy but cleaner. Try drop shadow instead of 3D. It'll be easier to make it look correct. The 'HIP' need work. 'E' is decent. Practice more until you get the flow.
yea, I see how the fill was sloppy I did it left to right but not quickly. I will try drop shadowing my next throw.
mase it looks good but its hard to see any detail so its hard to crit, looks decent to me... fnk i would avoid letting ur letters overlap to the point where its too close, like the US that little part inside the U thats supposed to be part of the s, coulda just moved the S over a bit and u wouldnt haveta do that... also u should try all capital letters or something, the E is just too small and its floating away... i think itd look better without the yellow too, or if u just used to yellow for highlights instead of all over
Cause- Try to make your letters even, such as the bottom of the letters not all being at the same level. It will look cleaner. Mase- Lookin pretty clean, maybe its just the angle of the flic but alot of the bottoms of the letters are cut off. Painted a new throw I came up with, also thinking of doing REKT now instead of REK... View attachment 574637 View attachment 574638 Came out alittle sloppy...shouldve taken my time And a better flic of this... View attachment 574639 Crits?
rekt sounds like such an over used name. 2nd piece isn't bad. The main bar of the R seems a bit wide though. also lol at the penis at the bottom
Yea i guess...Idk i wanted more than just REK, and i dont know anyone in my area that writes REKT... yea...the spot needs to be rolled really bad
Mase - make the bottom of the M a little thicker. It looks good. I like that busy throw too. Cause - your right about the bottom of the C and your letters are all over the place. Go back to simpler bars with standard width for a while. Rekt, it looks good. especially the throw. I didn't like the way this R turned out. I suck at painting. Everything I do looks better on paper. View attachment 574650