That's what I was thinking. I mean yea the letters have the same style but there's a lot of weird extensions, weird bars that get fatter or skinnier, and 3-D that's really off. No hate Grater but I'd say go simpler with that and get your flow down better before adding a lot of crazy shit like that.
Sekta i made a cupple of days ago, freestyle. [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...0239666830697_842135696_13352963_341597_n.jpg
those bubbles are dopeshit.... the S would look good in a different piece, doesnt really flow with this one... the A could use some work, probably just dont do the separate crossbar, keep it attached to the side bars, u could make it match the K pretty well and itd be nice. also not feelin that tag, looks like u went over the same line multiple times in a few places, tags should be fast, a one-stroke kinda deal, at least thats my foolish opinion
Ya Sekta it looks like each letter there kinda has it's own style so each letter doesn't really play off the others and that makes it seem pretty plain. The letters themselves aren't bad and good can control just seems like your style's all over the place.
thanks for crits, I agree with you. About the tag, i did mess it up alot by using two strokes on it. I did another piece the day after, check it out. This one isnt a freestyle. [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...239823090697_842135696_13356851_3015275_n.jpg Im not really happy about the A on this one.
sekta only thing im not likin is the S besides that its goin kros the A is fine wats wrong wit it ? [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...16482423_100000615455157_215650_5121635_n.jpg Hello world .
Sekta that's a bit better and like you said the A is a little off. Also the K maybe don't quite connect the top bar back so it looks less like an R next time. I would love to see some sketches from you cause I wanna see where you're coming from as far as your style and what you can do on paper vs a wall so if you have any sketches please post some up. Keep it up.
kriskros- I wouldn't do the a's crossbar like that diehippie-I would make the e the kind with the vertical bar, i feel like it would fit the other letters more. bilnek- I like the ACAB at the bottom. nice and bold. [Broken External Image]:http://www.flickr.com/photos/51469299@N08/4797887003/ I don't know if the image is gonna work. how do you post photos from flickr?
Basically just take the URL and click the insert image button. Paste the URL and hit enter. If it worked the picture will show in the post box before you hit post.
Go to the photo you want....Right Click it then click "copy image location" Then to post it click on the lil yellow box with the mountain lookin things. and paste the url in their. and BAM their you go
Ok that's not too bad actually but I'd say get rid of the arrows, coloring, and background and just focus on those letters. I'd say the B is the best letter there. Don't focus on your colors just focus on each letter and sketching them over and over. Try to keep the bars a little bit closer in size like the B isn't bad but that second E at the top it just gets really skinny for no reason. Also keep your proportions in check so if you drew a line on top of the letters and a line on the bottom they would be parallel. Right now quantity is more important than quality (quality meaning fully colored pieces/backgrounds/characters/ect) so just keep banging them out. Hope that helped I'm exhausted so I hope it made as much sense here as it did to me haha.