The top right 3d angle isnt the same as on the left. Step back from your piece next time and look at it before finishing up everything to make sure all that is correct. Just makes it look... not as good as it could be, just because of something so silly to miss while doing it.
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fucked up the w, like the colors [Broken External Image]:http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/6651/simppps.jpg
Kew all of that is dope, I really like it anyways heres something i just sketched up, crits are appreciated [Broken External Image]:http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/3443/havocsimple.jpg
try to make your letters more proportionate (letter height/width) try to connect the bars that go through your h and a keep practicing
Is this any better? I connected the h and the a and made the bar go throughout the simple [Broken External Image]:http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8610/scan0003kk.jpg
some avery slaps...eh. reworkin my style so heres some simps. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/5062/1000385.jpg abeone- your styles not bad but i feel like your using crayola markers or something it reallllyyy detracts from the overall look, for me anyways havoc-like your letter structure on the second one better but ditch the arow
dropped the arrow but still have the bar, any better? [Broken External Image]:http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7485/havocsimplealtered.jpg
Here bro! Drew this up not to show you up but to try to show you the importance of serfs on letter forms. You also want to be conscious about swing, the movement of letter form. Most of the time you want it to move in the same direction, ie... creating movement and motion. Connections come next. Be on the hunt for connections whenever you draw but letter form is the most important aspect of writing. As you find a letter form that you like your connection will become more clear. Keep practicing and find maybe one or two influences to bite from, if you try to bite from too many your shit just falls apart.
@Havoc Close the gap in the H slightly I think. Where the bar goes into the O and comes out the top, make it go with the bar of the O cause it looks like its coming out of nowhere at the top. Ok, Ive fucked up the C and the curve is maybe too severe, or not severe enough. Maybe I could have chose different bars. Who knows. Just to give you an idea of what I mean really. [Broken External Image]:http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/3400/havocsketch.jpg