lagosta,first of all nothing about that image you rendered flows,it is seering a cancerous hole in my retinas,and you want to know why?the "D" looks stupidit has nothing in common with any of the other letters,the "a" looks as if a dictionary took a whompin shit and the first letter that came out of it after sifting through corn and peanuts yiou decided it was something that needed to be shared with the whole wide world.the "K" is straight wack and the "e" is lower case which even if it were written in 24 carat gold ink makes it look like tampon squeezings...the ------> underneath it all is hurrendous... what I'm trying to say is this... put effort into what you do, look at it a while, study what you have done,determine to yourself if it looks good enough to share with the whole world,and if you do decide to post it dont post it up with some crappy ass cell phone camera picture that has a scratched lense making the quality of the pic hideous.then after you get all of that crap figured out .then post it up but never I mean never ever fucking bump your own fucking lame ass shit for a fucking crit unless what your looking for is an oldfashioned schoolyard buttfucking. but since you said please it took it easy on you....follow these rules and your life will bwe filled with less and less tears as you progress...
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quick paper shit... few RESN tags and one LABER tag ... ill get some fliks or real street shit today View attachment 577016
Deco those are great keep them up and don't be afraid to change your style from time to time. And Cuccui.... you are a terrible piece of shit. All you do is talk shit about people. You arent even using paint markers you're using brushes. Go back to the dumpster you crawled out of. Anyways i changed my handstyle a bit. Crits are appreciated [Broken External Image]:http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7069/newhavoctag.jpg
cheek thank you I appreciate your feedback.you are an intelligent individual I aam sure...my words were meant to discourage rather than promote lack of talent.but my dumpster?rephrase that with ferrari and we have a deal.
save them from trouble enlightened one...90% of these toys have no idea what they are getting themselves into...I'm not here to win any popularity contests,but at the same time I would like to help people who genuinely want to learn what it takes to excel not only on this board but also in life...if you think of the toy forum as boot camp i could be thought of as a drill sargeant in so many words.most of you spend so much of your time trying to make your stuff look like "graffitti" that you miss the point all together...and the point is what? I bet you dont eben know.and you call me a stupid troll...
Havoc- I like. Possibly have the V be the size of the O and C, or the O and C the size of the V? It all looks good, that may just make it all the better [Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9189/eask.jpg I've been practicing for a good bit, but still can't determine which S and which K flows better, so I have both. Crits are very much appreciated
put the k from the second one on the first one, that might solve your problem,try seperating the letters just the teeniest bit...
The original point of graffiti was to express yourself and get fame, it was a pillar of hip hop culture. Obviously I'm wrong though arent I? Anyways I see what you were doing now, sorry for being an asshole
Tank- I like the AS combination on the first hand. I think I'd like to see the E rotated and the bottom curved out instead of coming to a point like it does. I'm just not feeling the K. Keep at it. Havoc- I'm just having trouble finding a lot of flow in it. The HA balance, I suppose, but the rest falls off. Maybe post some simpler hands and go from there. It's not a bad hand, it just doesn't have the flow or cleanliness I like to see. And as for the bickering goes, we're all trying to get better and develop our style. Help each other out. We have the same goal. My repertoire of hands. Crit em if you want. I'm feeling one or two of them.
havoc-try to make your letters the same size eask-i'm feelin the 1st more, but i'd suggest fucking around with a lowercase A jaep-the top and bottom hands are sick, the middle and side hands are kinda hard to read at first glance though stigma-can't tell what your hand says, i'd deefinitely start over and go hella simpler haven't posted in a minute, this is just some shit i found lurkin around flickr. View attachment 577163 View attachment 577164 View attachment 577165 View attachment 577166 View attachment 577167 View attachment 577168 View attachment 577169