word.. well see wat i can pull out next time im off haha.. i perfer throws and shit only cause i love bombing the streets.. but thanks for the crits.. will be workin wit more pieces for sure. edit EST2007 that wall looks hella cool.. keep at it dude!!!
Roal, When you do O's like that, they could be mistaken for a D and i think if you connected the R leg to the A and also used it to emphasize and underline the O that could make it pop, The bar on the A that comes down from the arch needs to swoop far more to the left then go right, and the L looks alot like a B, Im glad to see you starting new stuff, paint more stuff like that and youll be good in no time. I personally think everyone shoulld master painting simples then move on, just not like that kid rewt, dude got a pretty huge E-go for someone who just got stck on a straight letters. Always try new shit, noone will progress if they fall into a routine
word yeah i hear u on the O thing and how to connect the R to the A and allow it to be the underline for the O.. i was actually tryin to get a differnt O but thats how it came out lmao.. also the L deff looks like a B some wat if you didnt know what i wrote for sure hear ya on that hahah... and for the A the loopy part im prob just gunna cut it off and work wit something different.. imo i think it looks like aboves A but that wasnt ment to be.. weakfingers keep doing your thing.. your one the only new guys in ur area that dont have a stupid fake thug ego from u know . thanks!
maybe shorten the L a bit on the right leg ya kno... and fix up the S make it the same size maybe as the K and A could be worked on at the bottom... just my 2cents... but other then all that im feeling the hell outta it.. the fills dope.. also should have added a 3d.
i feel like u shoulda rolled over whatever u covered. it ur gonna spend the time to piece, i say go all out
To be honest, I'm not a fan of the letters. But, it's yours not mine. I would say make the letters a little more defined, because I agree with the others they can be mistaken. I like the color combo, but I would make sure to clean up the cuts and the lines man. Stay up. Oh, and SLAK.. I agree with EST on this you should have rolled it or.. created "something" to separate you from what was there previously. Fill's hot, and I like the letters. GET AT IT..
roal- i know you been hereing this alot but simple, btw your sec shit is on point. slak- maybe add some 3d to make it pop View attachment 577717
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Haha thank's. I try to keep a positive look on things. I wouldn't say I don't have an ego, I get caught slippin' now and then. I feel our area has some dudes that got huge egos that are way to big for there quality of work.... Thats there game tho'. Don't even get me started on the 905 thread, Anyone whos benched the areas knows that thread is constant re posts. I got into graffiti to have fun and decorate my surroundings. I hate beef. Sometimes its very justifiably but for most of the time its blown way out of proportion, when a simple "sorry" could of ended it. I'm out of the game for a couple months because of shoulder surgery but when I come back watch out. Reposts for now. The Toy/Anion/chowda/Rewt- Fuck you kid, paint some more straights, itill step up your status.
for sure the area is full of ego tards and idiots.. but all i worry about is my game not what they do .. seems they worry more about my problems and text on the internet then they do in the actual game. anyways stay up.. fuck airbag dust... blinded in the right eye sucks. and i still paint [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...75_430053532880_511312880_4786063_50751_n.jpg
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I don't like the first one at all, and the second's the best imo. Kuto - For sure, paint that. And everything else on this page is basically good.
ya the wall i was painting is pretty high.. i was like tippy toeing to paint all the throws haha but the ROAL throw whats bad about it if u dun like it hah... cant just say its shit and not give a crit or 2 about whats wrong with it.. also fury post some work
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