why is rewt so full of himself... paint more then str8s... u have them flowing well.. work wit other styles dude..and dont think ur king of the toy forum or something cause u can bust a str8 letter ahha... toy forum is for toys to learn not hate n e beef eachother... ur suppose to help others and learn from ur mistakes... anyways heres something i did yesterday new word im working with only down fall i can notice is the extention on the LEG of the K other then that any crits from you guys.. would be apperciated. mone thats dope.. keep it up esk im feelin the way ur letters are going. resn fix that N as u said
one.. middle bar on the h should be same width as the side bars and your 3d is off all over the place bud
its all over the place only cause i suck at 3d but its getting there in a way.. im mainly aiming for the letter structure b4 the 3d gets on point but hows the lettering minus the middle ''bar'' of the ''H'' and the ''right leg'' of the "K" extention..
Either your o is too thick or the rest of the letters are too thin, left side of the r and bottom right of it are too thin compared to the top as well, and lose the extension on the h. Doesnt fit
Problem with this is, since we're all toys here, helping other toys out isn't going to do much. A situation similar to this is like Blind men trying to guide other blind men. One could argue that it's still possible to learn here (because I learned some shit here myself), but this was just my two cents.
It's when the better kids hop in and throw in their two cents. It's like real life, choose what you take into account. That R is clean as fuck on that Hork. But that O is too thick, and the mid bar of the H is too thin. and the right leg of the K that you already know about.
....for "toys" this shit is fucking beastly to me. i dont even wanna post any of my shit....ide get so much junk from it.
my piece 2 weeks ago ^^ ^^ leftovers 2 days ago by the way im from israel.... he it's my flickr http://www.flickr.com/photos/52306931@N07/
[ 3 weeks ago ^^ ^^ left overs piece by the way im from israel....... my flickr http://www.flickr.com/photos/52306931@N07/
That second k is really off looking. The S needs work, the bottom part that goes down and to the left should be bigger. The very end of the bottom of the E all of a sudden gets skinny. Also I think if youre going to be drawin those ovals coming off the letter you should do something different than a boxy end to a letter because it kind of looks silly. You planning on coloring it? I like where youre going with it
Ill just say my quick rant now. Please if your toy, do not go on freights to practice a new name or practice in general. Im not trying to single out you Hork but toys in general painting freights. I see it way to often on here and in real life. Your just ruining your name for the other bigger writers in your hood that paint trains and your losing respect where ever your train goes, People will always say "well theres way worse shit then mine on freights", but look at yourself a year back and imagine that shit on a freight train... then think where your gonna be in another year. Get what im saying? I dont know if its just the way I was brought into the game but painting freights should be left for people that can paint them properly. Wasent it sapoused to be if you knew someone who painted freights, they where to take you? Oh well, You can either think about my view or continue to embarass yourself. Again im not trying to single anyone out im just saying this in general. Here hork heres some visual help.
i see your point but that just goes for the real bad ones and its not like all the writers go "oh see this dude, he makes me fuckin angry painting freights not having proper skillz"..blablasbla,its way less of a thing than i can imagine and i wouldnt care about ohters so much and finally i rather see horks stuff on freights than nothing..same goes for rewt
yo i understand u 100% but if ppl were not gunna paint trains that are not up to par then how they get better?... kwest trede mpower lewis jase kem5 etc on n on they practiced and got to where they are now wit writing on trains... practicing on trains is the only way to get better wit train graffiti... its harder then painting walls.which is why its a bigger game..and the K u did is nice for sure...that was the first hork i pretty much did its only gunna get better... thanks weakfingers for the crits cause thats pretty much 100% true... but the loosing respect for painting the yard i live in isnt really a bother... they paint their trains here too some move some never leave.. they kno who they are but they aint against me for painting a few trains a month i rather flick trains till i have a good style and all..plus i wont get better by jus drawin on paper and wishin to paint a train cause someones gunna say oh thats uglier then the dude 6cars down from 4000 miles away but word do yo thang
Word, i dident wanna sound like i was singling you out at all homie, I admit I dident think of how hard painting an actual train really is but what I dident really mention is when I go out and bench, I always just see hollow scribbles over most of the trains.