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NOTE: looks like you are on track.. it will look better and better the more you write it, flow evolves.. For improvement I would lose the underlines altogether. Separate the O from the N a bit more. Your S is probably the best letter on that page.
that sorta looks like this *****h on scooby-doo back when I was a kid ( more of one anyways) guy was trying to scare away realistaters from buying out his business since it was about to go under or some shit. but I guess if you tilt your head it looks like a retarded horse.
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You should try going simpler in that handstyle right now.. Even the simple on on the stop sign gets all crazy at the U.
gum i like that. maybe space out the air a bit. the I is really hidden. and fuckthefame listen to phil. View attachment 580768 btw this is not a real effort nor what i write. it was the best looking out of the scribbles i put down