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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    yeah i did that on the fly. i write it hear and there. this was one of my first attempts at it. hence the shaky top part of the L.
     
  2. 2FNK?

    2FNK? Senior Member

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    Leaks- imo, your Y in the YNOT looks like an s. If I were you I'd differentiate it a little.
     
  3. MakeItTakeIt

    MakeItTakeIt Senior Member

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    T's are hard to flow in general. They leave a lot of dead space just because of the shape of the letter. OT combo is especially tricky. I usually give the t a little bit of curve so it fits.

    I like the flow of your y and n together though. That L looks kinda awkward and good at the same time. Fuck it, I like it. And lose the kink on the leg of the k and shape it like your other letters.
     
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  4. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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    i dont know something new. crits?
     

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  5. DEOS96

    DEOS96 Member

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    the black and white are kinda wack
    crits ?
     
  6. paniik

    paniik Member

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    DEOS - I like the red one in the 2nd pic but the S is pretty complicated
     
  7. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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    DEOS i like the puprle ones
     
  8. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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  9. paniik

    paniik Member

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    Give him some advice aswell instead of just putting him down.
     
  10. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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  11. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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  12. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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  13. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Well being that you've had the same damn throw as your signature this whole damn time I think it's time to draw something new.
     
  14. LIGRAFF

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  15. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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    Mr Yarbles i was talking about the throw i posted on the last page
     
  16. 3Cr1k7

    3Cr1k7 Member

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    some throwies i put together last night

    the first one i know the i and k need to be fatter and the c needs to overlap.

    ai1046.photobucket.com_albums_b467_austinr317_Image107.jpg

    i think i could have done a better i and c on this one.

    ai1046.photobucket.com_albums_b467_austinr317_Image106.jpg
     
  17. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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    i like the first one the second one needs a lil work but thats my 2 cents
     
  18. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Eh you're a nice guy so I'll help you out.
    Lose the arrows.
    Make all your letters the same size some are fat some are small you can get away with a little bit of proportion slops but it's really legible in this
    Your middle letters are still letters so repsect them.
    Also don't use the bottom of your paper I know it's easier but it dosn't get you very far.
    Your style is going to look shitty just give it time and it'll get good.

    Also if you don't have a good handstyle start working on it
    I didn't get throws until I got I got a handle on my handles.
    Same goes for piecing.
    Yarbles out.
     
  19. iamBoZ96

    iamBoZ96 Senior Member

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  20. rewz

    rewz Senior Member

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