Dont' put up any of those stickers

 

Gimme your thoughts on this.. I haven't done anything in a long time, so I just did this quick, and for fun.

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Oh, you caught my sarcasm?
Holy shit, get this guy a medal.

 

i dig this one .. nice metal logo art looking letters and 3d isnt all that bad wish the pic quality was better tho

 

Quick re-up on the jawn I did on the hat. No markers so I can't throw in a fill.

 

niggha are you blind? that shit is terrible.

and oeost, you need to work on simples. pronto.

 

t and o didnt turn out like i wanted

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Diggin the e..... You need to use a diff outline colour....can hardly see the letters individually

 

hey guys just some crap i did, crits please. the second one i did in class on a scrap page
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Do they ever(corroded doughnuts, super uneven bars)?

I like to think of you as a retarded person; just let you do what ever you want, and hope to god that one day.... One day you'll do something right(not being able to tally votes properly).

 

Saint I don't like the first one, drop the arrows and the fancy stuff and work on the actual letters themselves. The second one is decent but the S is whack and the 3d is suffering in areas. I would say redo the second one because it has potential but drop the weird extensions and such on the I A and T and rework the S completely. maybe tweak the T a little cuz it looks a little strange, but not as whack as the S.

 

^Agreed.

There's something about that top one that just looks so nasty, in a bad way.....
Maybe it's the pointy-ness. Or maybe it's because the bars are uneven.
I'd try to stay away from fancy shit right now.
Copy the letters from your keyboard, then branch out from there.

 

i know guys i get what your saying completly. im just gona stick to simples
thanks

 

just wondering, should i drop the 3D aswell ?

 

Yep.
While you work on your pieces, try working on your hand, and your throws.
Remember, keep it simple. Don't try something that you aren't capable of, until you truly feel that you are ready.

 

yeah drop your 3d for now, your not bad at 3d, it lacks in spots but that should not be your main focus right now.

 

tofe- exactly the same as it was 6 months ago
saint- simplify second one, lose the arrows and stuff and just work on the letters. it not far away though

 

will do guys ill post a few pics soon

 

Couple flicks from yÈ old blackbook.