i said the first s is ill not the whole piece

 

Nevertheless, the S is wack. Look at how skinny that bar gets. It looks like his S is going to snap in half.

 

here are my first ones in order
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And this is my own style im making, what you think?
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Simples

 

loki definitely summed up this page lol..... even though her shit isnt structure-tastic lol at least she knows wud up... i got problems too, practice makes perfect i guess

EATR is the only one thats doing what he should be, simples

paint marker crapps

 

i think what makes graff so great is the individuality of each throwup burner or whatever. if we all try to do the same structure then graff would be boring. what really is "right structure"? you're saying it's the one everyone else uses but i disagree...

now i present my progression.


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my first real style. i still love this one.

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eskir ur asking what really is right structure... take a look at what u posted and then look at the rest of this page... that right there is the difference between having structure and not having it... it goes for things other than letters too though, like in that rockwitit piece the guys head and neck are disproportionate to the rest of his body, and it makes it look kinda jank, proportions are all structure is about...

i do know what ur saying though and i like some of my shit that has no structure at all, but its because i see my style forming within it and i get a kick outta having my own style, u have ur own too, and so will the kids that post pieces on here and get made fun of, u gotta eventually go back to simps and get some structure down, but everyone breaks the rules cuz everyone wants to rock a piece... that is all

 

didn't know where else to post these.
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SEAZ - finally finished this, getting back into sketching (again) as I recently found out I'm friends with SEMIK haha

 

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I'd definately rock those haha! The only thing I can see that's weird with the letters is the leg of the R going back into the other bar but that's just not my style haha other than that good stuff.

 

Clean stuff there JHIZ I like it.

 

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bars and simples my *****

 

mawks: those are dope
Jhiz: feelin it.. super fresh.
exi: it would probably be in your best interest to forgot you ever saw those learn graffiti letters and start from scratch so you can better develop your style not someone elses with a couple of your tweaks. nah mean.. no hate just tryin to help.

crits?
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a quikie for a battle wrote 21 instead of 12

 

rec: what do you mean? can you give me a link to letters so I can learn?

 

another simple one, i did this in class ive notticed a few mistakes already but what do u guys think ? crits ?

@exi
look at your keyboard, thats the best youll find to learn from