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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    Misoe, I thot it was Nisoe which is the name of some dood that we beef with lol but looks pretty dope besides the M
    Wreck..I seen too many people with that name but aside from that the 1st one is really clean but its way to strait for my taste and the top of the E and the K look awkward
    And that obama thing is pretty funny
     
  2. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    i think the obama is great, no need to work over in my opinion, you have some serious drawing skills. but your graff aint so good.
     
  3. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    thanks for opinions, im working on getting better at both. I figure its more or less a time and practice thing. I drew it from a pic online so proportions might be sorta off. Considering a name change now though...
     
  4. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    I've been wanting to change my name too but I just love the letters so much they just flow the way I like if saber didn't exist that be my name but I'd put it to shame lol
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    Oh ya what color would look good for the forcefield, I was thinking something cherry red like
     
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  5. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    what colors do you have
    yeah ive been practicing wreck for like a year or so. im thinking maybe omar but ive seen that in the ohio thread
     
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  6. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    Fuck it they're probly no even in the same state so no problem, but I'm just saying work on it so you'll be better than any of the other ones I seen
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    Shitty pic but ya and I got a bunch of shades of these colors whether sharpie, prisma or highliters lol
     
  7. dangeri

    dangeri Elite Member

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    B+w 4 the wall am painting 2mo, gotta sort the 3d out mind, no ideas on colours yet either, so suggestions + crits welcome
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  8. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    i think a grimey green would look nice with the theme you got, as far as the characters coming off your letters

    something like this

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  9. Chippey

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    misoe - yes i think the m should match up more, and i think it would look better with no break in the s. And i think the drop shadow on the i needs a bit of blue (though it might not be correct, but it would look better.

    Wreck - Your letters look like their from slightly different styles, try keep the bar width the same where you can, and to keep them the same height. Obama dope stencil is dope, cut that - the pics pretty small and the purple masks the black in places so im not going to look through it for islands.

    Smokers - too many needless extensions such as on the j, but ace colour scheme.
     
  10. <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>

    <[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]> Senior Member

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    What J? It reads (top)WMH (middle)SMOKE and(bottom) GSK
     
  11. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    ai53.tinypic.com_10x7zq0.jpg
    ill work on it tonight, getting 6 random colors tommorow
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    yes I am aware I cant write that
    thanks for the tips
     
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  12. One Evil

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    lol
    i bombed for the first bunch of years.. im finally tryin to piece.. so ya gatta start some where right.
     
  13. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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  14. ChadOne

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  15. ManikOner

    ManikOner Senior Member

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    Chad - i like it it works but i think the o needs to be more defined or maybe just bigger. cool tho
     
  16. Shell703

    Shell703 Senior Member

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    View attachment 584677

    Diggin in the archives.."DUB"

    agree with manik about the O and i'd make the N more dynamic like what you did with the S to make the whole piece come together, maybe try enlarging and making the right bar of the N taller.
     
  17. unique93

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  18. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    Crits please, I'm trying to get simps down :s, am I taking the right path?
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    also, what steps should I do next to advancing my writing skills?
     
  19. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    i wonder how old you guys are?? its common snese practice practice and some drugs.
     
  20. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    I'm 17 and just wondering how my practices are going, if im doing the right or not