Sope- You're gonna be tagging wayyyyyy more than your going to piece, so work on your tag. I think the red ones best, the perple and green one has good 3d, but all the holes and add ons are distracting. And why is the P shitting out a blue leg in the first one?

 

sope- what sbal said.
wils- what zookyook said
kew1- it looks pretty clean, but yea. you fuked up on the 3d. Does is Say ERK?.

 

yea it says erk i tried messin wit the letters like the wit the k an r to make it flow better

 

it's a horseshoe lol. idk why I drew it but I just did.
here's one i did yesterday, not that good

 

sope i think you should just worry about doing black and white pieces for now intead of coloring. Its better to have solid structure as opposed to a solid fill, thats just my opinion

 

/\ agreed, shadow needs work aswell bud, e's shadow is gettin off, like that green n purple one above tho,

Wils, mega improvement from last time I seen y stuff, top one is sweet,

And kew, love your e's man,

 

Yeah taht was my first time doing a shadow instead of a 3d so .

 

I find it helps if you draw the shadow as part of the letter, rarther than put it on as a last thing,

 

i didint think id ever post my shit here but im curious what people think
been writing for close to a year but only seriously in the past couple months

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Doug, the second one reminds me of a clown and too much acid, this isn't necessarily a bad thing! Keep it up bro!

 

doug- that 2nd looks like a clean fill, but im not digging all the yellow bubbles in your 3d.


some1 passed this huge books to me it was like 15"x20"
and i had it sitting in my closet for like 4 days with just the SERG on it. then i added the character and the Rising Sun backround last.


Heres is a new Steezy im working on, its a colab with my homie SPILZ.
if you don't notice, i fucked up on my drop shadow baaadddddd.

 

serg try to keep ur 3d consistant make it it the same thickness as all other 3d

 

i like this one.

 

could this pass in the intermediate thread?

 

Not quite yet. But you're getting there. Keep it up.

 

crits?

 

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PREA - nice structure man. im jealous
STIGMA - still no 3d? work on those proportions too man

 

bottom page bump for crits

prea: great straight letters
stigma im sorry but i cant read it, to much going on.
fucktheflame: top on is clean but u needa work on ur tags, bottom one is clean too

 

that pink one is dope, somthing about the R bugs me but i dont know what

stigma- you're trying too hard, do less. Do nothing at all
prea do something more with that A, the rest i a pretty dope simple
dirty doug- it look good but the 3d is kinda lame in my opinion, the yellow doesnt really go well with the rest of the fill.