NEBS go simpler
Mone, I'm not feeling the M
Squint, I'm feeling the blocky style,
Safe I agree that the canvas would be tight without the red

Some wackness:
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And the Mad Hatter colored in pen freestyle

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check it, edward btw thats dope! Mone your style is devolpin nice.
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Bumpin this cuz I need some crits..

 

Yeah my M is whack on that piece..
Your Mad hater is pretty sick

 

id would be dope if it read n t z or n y z , like your c half r is a nice n and your z e ist just a z and well the middle letter is nothing real yet...
but the craze...well its not too bad though.. r a overlap too much

 

seyoooo i mber you from pg you be stayin up on both? Good shit btw

 

keso i feel the color scheme but the letters dont really flow together
kaiser that reds simp isnt too bad if the letters were closer together n the 3d not so dominating
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im back you fuckers..give me some crits. an i already know the m is homo.

 

loll i am graffiti god!
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but on a seriouse note, n echange for moter
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and some funk
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so do you write here or germ? i wouldnt be paintin and then switch your name up....and that top one looks like you tryna be augor son.

 

i realize i hate the double E so i switched it up. Im aware there are prolly a dozen other germ's but i guess theres one more now. And yeah the top one i wanted to try n augor styled sketch. was easy use thin bars and then add a shitload of cuts and bubbles lol

 

Ive seen like a dozen "Germ's" and "grims" in my city alone..

 

thanks logik, bombin science and puregraffiti are the sites i usually use. That and flickr,
anyways some unfinished shit!
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flames arent meant to look real jus sayin..

 

your trying to hard ... jus sayin..

 

^^^^^^^

 

Craz, loosen it up. The R and A feel really stiff.
Seyor, not feeling the new style that much, to be honest. I don't know. Not my cup of tea. Although, that R is dope. ( at the full pager )
Reds, pretty dope, as always.
And personally, I'm reaaaaally feeling all of that Squint piece. Fucking dope style.
Cruz, That U is too fat and round. Keep experimenting, it's coming along.
Black to the Future, that canvas is illin'. The sketch, eh. It has too many pointless extensions.
Sezer, I like your throws, not so much the concept of that last...'collage"
Here, dope. Always diggin your shit
Merta, take out those thin extensions and it'll look a lot better. And of course fix the M.

Crits for mine?

 

cool story bro...just sayin.

 

can someone give a me a fuckin single crit or are my posts just invisible to everyone except my own fuckin computer...
STUCK-not feeling the pink and brown fill but i like the switch-off colors technique
WINGS-the robot and flames...ehhhhhhh. otherwise tight letters and flow
KRINGE-thats forced looking idk
now. go fucking look at my shit and give me an opinion. yes im drunk so im bitching but goddamn it people.

 

Read.

 

hahahaha oh did you edit that like right before i posted my raging shit cuz i like didnt see it. my bad though i just wanted to see if my internet was working hahah