Yo Void.. I would Void that throw and try to start more simple

 

Which letter?

 

void-keep all your letters simple and have a similar style lose the shines and color just practice your letters by doing outlines .

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hip hop is a culture not a genre of music....

void and hipe, the faster u do throws the cleaner theyll look.... it looks like u guys move the marker really slow and without much flow... ull get style once u practice that over and over.... and over

 

Alright thanks. I'll post another when i think its better.

 

H1P3, i like the style you're using but the "i" looks out of place, try to make it blend in with the other letters. it just kinda stands out. I like the two on the top

 

Done using the last of the finest dollar general paint...

 

stick to pen and paper .. the paint doesn't explain the wack letters.

 

Any better Zook? if not any crits?

 

toy throw battle
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tone down that handstyle void, its got too much goin on, tags look better simple and clean... and just do what u did to that page to like, a whole notebook or 2 or 10 hah, its all about practice, to crit those id say make the I thinner than the O, and change the V a bit, like lose the bump on the top left, the one on the right will work, for now dont be ashamed to go bite some real writers, then when u can do somethin that looks good, change it around so its ur own style

 

Thanks Zook. Nice crits there. Any legends out there that have V in it?

 

revok, sever, savior, solve, vizie, thats all i got right now... check the artist list on the freights link on here... ill make it easy for u...

throwie for talkin out me arse...

 

Zook i really like the way you write your letters, that kinda the style im working towards, all smushed up and round. right now im just doing bars and really simple shit, how long did it take you to develop that style?

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ive been doing this bullshit for 3 hours, what now!?

 

zook paint that shit

gnarr work on your bars they are all over the place

 

zook thats a mean throw, fukn sick

 

as in make them even? what specifically? which letters in general suck the most?

 

gnar your bars arent the same width etc, your O in record is bigger than your c, r, etc. the top of the I's are too small to fit your letters, do this. draw out the letter. example. you draw 4 bars for E, 3 for I 3 for A etc.

 

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