Dope Brains & Mone

Quick Byen sketch

 

this is a piece for the final roun of the round robin tourney , it's me counterculutre and undergroundanimal in the final round so i am niot expecting many votes but i like the way it came out i guess
weak- luv your style man and like the piece , maybe a smaller n
retro- like your use of color and you got somthin goin with your letters that i like but the n is hurtin man
crust-sweet sllap
donaldfour-dope simp
kaiser- finish that whole page man , vn

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i hate the throw up on top
piece isn't too great either...
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Sorry, retro, but that coloring is nice, but those letters are Toy BB material.

 

i dont think so crust. his letters have style n flow..i mean they do not fit all together that nice but hes on the right way unlike other people in here. if youd throw him out you had to throw out wgone too in my opinion...

 

Naw....The letters may seem nice...But essence they have no flow....Take the B for example its pointing in one direction while the U is pointing in a complete different direction. Which creates the dead space between the letter B and the U. See that I mean. The add ons are just to cover-up the heavy amount of dead space which shouldn't be the case.( They are meant to establish more flow to a piece) Take all of that stuff off and you'll see what I mean. The S is a little too stylized compared to all the other letters to me.
Retro try to keep it simple and by that I mean with out all the extra stuff. Try to give your letters that initial lean with one another. But I see a lot of potential their bro.

ALSO Im really diggin that throw. Nice.

 

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i like it.

 

WGONE has letter structure and bar width straight throughout the whole piece. Not to mention, the flow is completely destroyed with the overabundance of negative space. Plus that throw is hideous.

 

Shit look mad ill to me man... What da fuck u talking about "belongs in the Toythread man"... He gots style for sure that belongs here...

 

haven't been here in a while...i see some dope shit all over the place

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i know im not clean ><"

 

looks kind of ill man

 

no markers so hears a page of filth
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this is what i think at math class

 

ready for intermediate?

 

tezer, exchange? -safer

mone, im working on your right now.

 

word up Safe right

 

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