exi the S is too thin in the middle and doesnt fit with the other letters first off, the bit on the top of the S, it doesnt work either, try extending that bar out the top of the S, then make a vertical bar in the same spot of the J, and make the bar on the top right of ur E the same way, just a vertical extended bar, same with the I if u want... im insomniac'd so ill just show u a rough idea of wtf im talkin bout, i tried not to fuck with ur letters too much, or the S at all for that matter haha
hahaha so true.... exi maybe use a ruler, it seems like you might have a shaky hand, which will improve with time, but if ya want it to look clean a ruler might help, or any straight edge for that matter.
haha... ya those are just little quickies from school i did with what i had... a fine tip sharpie and a pen...
crits? ________ TastyMcNasty: start simple, or it's either me because the picture quality is pretty crap. EXI/Justine: use bars, don't do all those corner, not neccessary. that's something I used to do, just write the letter's then draw bars over them.
ahah lol, s'all good. i haven't been sketching, but i will hopefully look around and take come criticism around here any tips to make it better? I used bars to sketch my letters
ya i think its a bit of both... i sure need practice but at the same time the only thing i have right now for taking flicks is my laptops webcam and as you noticed its pre shitty...
The A and E look almost legit... tha bottom extention on tha Y is not cool at all lolz... You will start to notice that keeping thing simple will not only help in the long run but will start to make things easier for you