1st one is bad 2nd one isnt even really a throw.. work on making the letters balanced and stylish on the 1st one, scrap the 2nd
its still really bad though. What do you think is good about it? Give yourself some crits real quick.
heres my crits... right off the bat, does it say AIO!?... next learn to 3d, that shit comin off the left of the A is a mess, n it goes in a different direction on the O (assuming thats an O) ... also u dont underline throwups, at least not with just a plain wiggly line, if u wanna underline it make a big bubbly throwup lookin underline, but dont even try that shit right now, what u needs ta do is just practice, burn through a shitload of paper trying to get a decent throwup with those letters, speed is key man.... if u cant do it fast dont bother, some spots look like u sketched over the shit like 10 times... also with ur handstyle, do that same shit i said bout the paper and the practice and the speed... also learn to post images not links to images, shits annoying, right click the picture u wanna post, click 'copy image location' and then come here and click the icon to the right of the lil envelope and paste it there....
Thank you. Can people do that next time instead of just saying that it sucks. Actually give constructive criticism. And i will work on everything you said cause i am very passionate about graffiti and i want to be the best i can be. Thank you
Hahahahahaha. And I thought this forum was boring. Thanks for the Lols, Cg22. KickOH's shit was also definitely hilarious. The Little corroded pokemon looking character KickOH drew made me spit out some of my orange juice on my monitor.
Personally i thought my letter formation was pretty good since i just started doing graffiti about 4 days ago. Im a super toy lol.
Just because im a toy dosent mean i cant give myself credit for doing something well when i just started 4 days ago. I have seen people post shit on here saying they have been in graffiti for like 2 months and i could burn them in a fucking mili second. Just because im a toy dosent mean im a piece of shit and cant credit myself. Dont confuse this with big headed-ness either. i know im not that great.
dude, seriously, you've only been writing for 4 days? your shit is so fire i thought for sure you've been writing for at least a week...
Are you being sarcastic? The only reason i ask is because people seem to be prone to putting others down on this forum...