Mone, I think that O is too round for the rest of the style. Oh, and try having the o overlap the n instead of the other way
Mone I think you should have made the right leg of the M curve like you did on the n....other then that lookin pretty good. heres some quick shit ive been doin' just tryin to get some shit down [Broken External Image]:http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/2430/imgp3399q.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/6769/imgp3400d.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/5327/imgp3401.jpg Here's an attempt at a character [Broken External Image]:http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/7799/imgp3402.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5702/imgp3403.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/246/imgp3404.jpg Some homiesss [Broken External Image]:http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/3298/iowav.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9393/porkk.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/3218/rilagoon.jpg
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not feeling that middle block hump thing on the M, but that could just be me, to each his own I guess.
Jester...some is good, some is bad. your structure is still off. like. on your r's and k's and e... the hole in a letter has to be formed by the bars of the letters. and you need to use bars to inform the entire backones of the E and R. and Zewl. those e's are too round for the rest of your style.
wud up zewl, that iowa and pork are slick, didnt know u knew them dudes... havent posted in a while, lately ive only been fuckin around when im drunk so it is what it is...
and please dont give me shit for that a-kid one, that one of my first sketches and ik i shouldnt be doin shit like that i need simpler...thought i would just post it. so crits?
Unique - nice style good flow, put that on a wall Nemor - love your funky simple style Diesel - the a kid isn't the only thing that we're gonna give you shit about. copy your keyboard like it's your favorite writer in the world Jester - same applies to you too, all the jester ones suck, and the second reks one is bad too. lose the extensions and arrows. the first reks one is good but only cuz you pulled off the slimy look well, which can disguise bad structure, which no offense is what that one has.
Jester, on the second Reks you had something going kinda. Do it again without the arrow, the broken off things, or the connections from r to k and e to s. Sketch whats left and tweak until the structure is solid.