true i see that thanks ribcage

 

That looks like a chill spot, you should try and take your time and do a clean, solid fill-in. Would make it look a lot nicer. Just a suggestion

 

o yup

 

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Didn't get none, don't know what to do for an m...

 

Some stupid old bullshit.
This was suppose to be for a battle, but I forgot to take a picture of it.
Meh.

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The drop shadow on this one is garbage.
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how bout all of it is garbage

 

Fair enough.
Coming from you though, I'm not even mad.
You still sketch your throws, and they still end up looking wack.

 

Very true^

 

guys leave the arab alone..... he may blow up

 

only letter i like on this is the H

 

^ oh swear, whats wrong w/ the rest then

 

^yikes, 2nd one h is terrible, the other 1's got potential tho. on the secnd 1s s, if you keep the bottom circular swirl the same and then just brought the top part of the s straight down like u did the other it would prolly look good with a new h

 

left side of the R is way too big, the E is just ugly to me, the A is funny looking, and the C is just bland.

 

thanks rib, ill work on that.

 

RIB I like the style you got going, only thing I think that needs work is the C, it is too bland

 

your definetly right bout the R's left bar and the c being bland, but its a goddamn c lol not sure how to put more flavor on it and make it fit that style when its in the middle...suggestion?

but the e&a I like, and will most likely not change

 

Crits

 

That B looks like a really wack heart... the S is really bad. Try to come up with a new one... It is really hard to Mess up an O. IMO. The I looks fine to me