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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. swae101

    swae101 Member

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    just experimenting



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  2. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    Call it what you want.. but ive honestly never seen that befor.. looks dope tho
     
  3. AcesFirst

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    Void - i like the second and third piece. alls i would say is dont tweak the placement them so theyre tilted differently or try not to change the size of the letters. good ideas though, like the fills. keep workin
    Swae - cool style. maybe change the leg or the R
     
  4. NEK1

    NEK1 New Member

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    First page in my black book. Ive been writing graffiti on and off the past 3 years and I finally decided to settle down with one name and actually work towards getting better at it. Crits please. I personally feel like my throwup is kinda toyish.
     

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  5. emore1

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    ive been doing graff for about a year, im trying to keep this name. any crits will help, thanks :)
     
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  6. EXI

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    like the fill on the first one emor, but the sharp edge on the r doesnt really flow with the whole bubbly feel

    also, work on letter structure, you need it man
     
  7. emore1

    emore1 New Member

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    would this be a better R
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    and this was just something i was trying. different style but whatever
     
  8. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  9. HugzNotThugz

    HugzNotThugz Member

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    aint clean, I know

    ONE-i personally think writing ONE is wack.. has potential to be a simple throw though. add some style to you're E and find a way to unify those letters-not physically, but with some reoccuring element.
    SWAE-i like where it's going, I'd try and upper case A. I think the bottom bar on the G is out of place imo
    NEK- ditch the tiny bits coming off your K and N, and make your bars and legs a bit more rectangular, less triangular?
    EMORE-same above, ditch the little bits coming off your M and R and whatnot, but I like the E and the rising sun fill. Your last picture could be pretty nice, gotta change the E on that one though. Make it more like the R to flow and add some steez.
    MONE-looks sick, imo the N shouldnt be chopped off or tucked behind the E


    more people gotta give crits... used to be 'give crits to get em'
     
  10. MoganOne

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    It looks good to me bro. I like that sloppy look man
     
  11. H1P30N3R

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  12. smokeitup

    smokeitup Elite Member

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  13. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...337918835363_525320362_16037038_4110204_n.jpg

    first crack at new shit, not done yet, i absolutely hate the right leg of the A and the P kinda looks like an e but it's a start feel free to rip apart

    @one use bars with your simps
    @swae keep it simple fur now
    @nek work on structure
    @emor if the first is supposed to be a throw it doesn't need a fancy ass fill
    @mogan pretty decent i actually really dig that broken O, your friend needs some work though
    @mesk love it, dirty and sexy
    @dkode the E doesn't quite flow with the rest of the letters other than that looks alright, lose the arrows at the corners
     
  14. Vøid

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  15. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^nice little simp i guess, but them shines look terrible and the tag needs work
     
  16. Vøid

    Vøid Member

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  17. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    void before you post one more flick of the exact same shit, please read the new to graff thread.
     
  18. Shofs17

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    Crits
     

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  19. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    hows this advice eat my dick faggit lil bitch
     
  20. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    your shit is way worse so shut your fucking mouth twat waffle