@everyone:


Well one time, I was at the store and I was walking down the chips isle and I saw some dip but i was thinking "should i get the hot or the mild dip?" turns out i eventually got the mild. but later on i found out the hot wasn't that hot in the first place.

 

ribcage- too many unneeded extensions... try and tone it down a bit... and loose the connection from the C to the H
prea- i'm liking that R and that E but not feeling that P so much...

 

i like the E, and @ribcage love how the C goes into the H

 

Quick doodle of "Phew".

 

I don't really see what you're trying to do with that bubbly tit thing, but you should try to make the letters look more symmetrical up top.

 

also....

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Freestyle with Permanent marker

 

@Mone looks good maybe try a new M out, seeinn that one a lot, just a thought
@phew i can barely make out any letters in there, i see what you're goin for but i'm not quite feelin it yet, just make sure the actual structure of the letter is down then you can fling em anyway you want
@prea i like it other than the hole on the P being a bit off it looks good
@lucid pleeeaase don't dot your i with a star it's like a bitch named candi doting her i with a heart, annoying as fuck
@reach on the right track, just keep practicing
@kils not a huge sticker guy, but i love it, that double sticker hand is sexy
@soar watch your bar width, the A and R look like a fat kid comin out of a candy store in a couple of em
@sbane you're doin the right stuff straight simples, sucks don't it? but it's absolutely worth it
@unique looks good reminds me of DOES, not callin a bite, but just looks familiar, but that might be because i just watched a good 8 videos of him lol
@conor got a lot of tumors comin outta your letters, and work on your handsteezes

now that that shit's outta the way, 2 pieces i've been working on, 1 i'm just reposting cause nobody knows how to crit in here and the other's new

old one


new one not quite done yet

can't stand the P in this but other than that i'm pretty happy

 

thanks guy and i think thats a killer S on the second and has the most flow out of all the letters you have. now just make it all flow together just as good evenly
so i'd say try goin with the second sketch more. i lieks it

 

scond 1 say spam?

 

yea first one's missing an M not done yet either

 

looks nice peg, i like second one better than first

 

just tryin' to get some cleanliness and 3d down real quick
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i'm goin' to try to find some time do a piece here soon

 

looks good zewl you did forget the 3d on the W on the second little extention

 

@boomslang-Dudee.....when i started graffiti, i thaught it was just for funn..but now i realize that its more then that...In my opinion its about gettin your name out and at least tryin to do something you like.It might not be perfect to other people but they can suck it, because I did something right for once..something I can be represented by.If its a lil messed up, who cares, so am I.So In my 13 years of life i would like to that everyone who got in my life and said something..Btw boombslang your one cool kid

 

crits

 

since your new i wont rip you a new ass hole, but it's give em to get em here

 

serbr- s is bad, 3d / shadow is off and ugly, and your letters get smaller from left to right. like the b tho

 

For some reason. I like this....Its simple enough. ANd I can see you trying a style. Nice. But like dude said. Give crits to get them......But since your new I'll hook ya up

Your S and E seem a little bigger than the rest of the letters. I think its due the curve you added to the bottom of both letters. Thin that out a little bit. Your little thing on both your S and E I would take off completely. DOsen't fit in with the rest of your letters....Remember you want uniform letters.