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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    rofl, arsk.. nice. here's one i did for a friendly battle against mogan.. It's horrible i know the M is trash..
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    here;s one i did with a pin during class
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  2. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    werm in my town. Had beef with him lol
     
  3. xX*Conor_Snake_Bites*Xx

    xX*Conor_Snake_Bites*Xx Member

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    @Morganone-My friend taggs Bonar but not boner..idk if it matters though
     
  4. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    hahahaha well, xX*Conor_Snake_Bites*Xx, one letter is a difference. Not much, but as long as there's no biting, he's set.

    Just out of curiosity, what do you write?
     
  5. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    Oh hey
    I actually took the time to fully do something..
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    And some slaps and bullshit sketches from school.
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  6. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    werm- like the simples keep it up...
    exi- im not feeling youre M or the extensions coming off the C or S's and simple up youre handy too...
    eons- i like all of it except i think the O could be bigger on that last peice...
    trying to work this style... crits?
     

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  7. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    yeah neither do i Tasty, was ju st a quick idk what to do piece haha.. thanks for the crits though
    kringe- like the slaps.. Work on your character though
    tasty- you need better camera man haha, but from waht i can see, the Second "O" is to wide of a opening to mee, too much negative space
     
  8. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Rewl notice how your M and S have smaller open space? you should have tried that with the C and K... Meke them fatter... I will get the piece done soon...
    Here is a different battle piece
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  9. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    this a new style i wanna keep workin on , different colors deffinatly, and a couple crooked drips, crits
     

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  10. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    Some simples I did earlier, Please give some critz that will help me improve!

    If there iss something you want me to try or do next time, feel free to take the pic into Paint,Photoshop,etc. and show me what you mean, than re upload it here!

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    CRITZ PLEASE K THX
     
  11. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    shits sick mone, and I think I know what your saying, I cant tell right now because I'm at school so I'll look at it in a minute
     
  12. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  13. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    Tasty McNasty... I'd stay with simples for now... your trying to force something at the moment from what i can see.
    Rask i'd say the same work on like the structure of your letters and less on developing a 'style' yet... Just get the structure down first.
    Mogan needs to stop posting in here and going to intermediate and possibly the 'big boys' soon.
    Knine just stick with the top block buster simple for a while until you get that down... drop some 3d on it and shit.
    Sick... that throw reminds me from like a year ago... the bottom sketch will be heading on the right lines definately just keeping busting out stuff like that but clean up your line work and shit.
    Exi focus on structure still... simple lettering with a good solid structure...

    Hope that helps.
     
  14. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    k guys i was workin on a sketch for a friend's design contest, and i did a rough on looseleaf and im just transfering it to a plain sheet now, any crits or suggestions before I ink it? i haven't even begun to explore ad ons and shit and im worried if i put some on it'll fuck shit up. should i try adding some shit or leave it as it is?

    ps. mogan stop posting here go to the int. thread already lol
    pps. sorry for the shit quality

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  15. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    Dont write rask... please

    Mone- the little top right bar on the K totally ruins the flow, make it going to the right not the left
     
  16. xX*Conor_Snake_Bites*Xx

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    @Mcdougall-I write "Merge" but im thinking of changing my name to "Heav"
    Whatcha write?
     
  17. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    pegcity- looks good man, wanna see it filled :p
     
  18. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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  19. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    More crits on this please?

    that's pretty clean, nice and simple. I noticed you've improved so much since I first saw you come on this site dude. I really am impressed and jealous you excelled so quick but good shit to you! Keep doing it!

    Hmm can't really see where your going with this, maybe just work on structure? Thier's nothing bad i can say about this, just clean up your structure!
     
  20. Serbr

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    @morganone ur style is fresh clean lines and simple
    @408bomber start to overlap your letters and curve your bars a bit

    shit fast charac for talking
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