yes... you are VERY toy... like i keep on saying loose the extensions the arrows etc. and stop doing fills... keyboard letters are a good reference to start...

 

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^haha!

upper90 make sure people can read your shit before you color it, and choose colors that arent gonna blend togethor and make your letters look like blobs of color smushed together, only one i can read is the last one

 

Quickly drew up some other shit today after work this is my second attempt at graffiti i should say

Changed the lettering to sato as i just think its a nice formation hopefully no one else is on road with this name?

 

thanks and what do you mean by fills?

 

Simples bro. Get a piece of binder paper and do your name exactley how the letters are on you'r keyboard.

I like this alot actualy, Im not feeling the arrow coming out of the A, maybe try and make it smaller or use a simple bar.




did this last night!!!


Please give honest crits, I don't like how the 3d on the E is but blehh hard to even it out compared to the K.

 

A fill is how you color your piece bro. Hence the name FILL.

your welcome

 

thanks for the crits and do i have potential?

and any suggestions on which style to go with?

 

of course,everybody has thier own potential the key to it is unlocking it. As for style you have to make up your own style.

but for now stick to keyboard letters. what do yu write? ill show you what yu should be doing.

 

I usually do "SICK" but ive never really decided on one yet and thanks so much

 

Well take sometime right now and think of 3-5 letters you like and try an form a name with them.

Think of words and how you can alter them, like my name for example
Canine - KNINE
Unque - UNEEK
Can Too - Can2


Get it?

 

Yea i do thanks umm okay STYUL

 

might wanna try something differant lol.....

sleep on it bro, remember your name is a respresentation of you! Find something that inside your mind,body,and soul yu feel is just so right.


bump for crits?

 

thanks again so much

 

Lolzy

 

No problem bro. That's what this community is for, helpng eachother out
United We Write!!!

 

k9 lose the details in the 3d try to relax and draw straight lines it looks like your forcing it, you cant force your self to be creative..

 

this is kinda w/e but just lookin for a little bit of critique.

I know that thats the famous rask, i dont care, pretty surre he writes in a different continent than me, and if not w/e everyone writeseverything