i think this statement is consdered an oxymoron...i say i think because i have no clue what the hell im talking about,...

 

rib cage- i like the style match the cross bars with all your letters the r,e,a,h... pull the A closer to the e, also if your going to put the little flips in the R,A,H put them in all the letters

93- dope magic fresh

mone- i like the same shit as always but the o does resemble a c. also the m's beginging is a little choppy

some resent and past shiz camera dates off **

 

Im going to post a one-line bubble letter. when i get home. Doing one lines would probably help me with my bubble letters

 

I'm picking up what your puttin down

 

Hahaha

 

what am i puttin down? just the suggestion orrr??

 

Some old battles, etc. Old stuff in general

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u write 5 years and still u have shaky lines....

@nos like ur last one

 

Any crits and ideas for a background is greatly appreciated.

I dig the majority of that, Nose, although, watch your widths. And, on the Smart Went Crazy one, those things....are weird. You know what things I mean..

Newt, pick a name that actually has some type of meaning to you, so that you will be more inclined to stick with it. And work on the throw a lott.

YesNoMaybe - Work on simples.

RibCage - Do keyboard letters/computer fonts.

 

dope fill kringe

 

kringe dopeness... i have no clue what you should do for a background tho...
shit from the past couple of days... im not feeling my S or A or the 3d ... always looking for crits

 

Ignore the D and the word at the bottom, I know the B is too small and the O is too big and the R is uneven. Feel free to crit, and the roundness is fucked.

 

k yea just work on tryin to keep yer letters generally the same size and proportionate. then maybe work on the flow of the whole thing and the letter structure. yer "b" can do without the crosshairs and the "r" the dolla dolla bill sign. that shit just looks silly at this point. but keep workin at it

 

Kringe, is that your crew inside your piece? fresh.

 

Yeah i know i did it with only one line. so yeah ty for crit i'll work on it

 

Nah, I write Eons 3. Tre = 3 in italian.
Although, putting crew name in the fill is also a good idea. Might use that some time.

 

BORE ... keep illin highliter high hup i neeeda get me some

 

hahaha mine is low on ink. i did that with out lifting the highlighter off the paper. good exercise

 

Nose-i like them all, and i really like the fill on that first
kringe-looks good to me man, although idk how i feel about that o being only half as big as the others
tasty-piece looks nice, the a and the R on the second throwie look pretty similar, although its not as bad on the 3rd, just work on that but youre headed in the right direction
Female-your letters get bigger as you go, and if youre gonna do mostly lowercase i'd do them all lowercase (the B), and like someone said id lose the random stuff for now and focus on your structure

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Did this one for the most recent battle, lookin for some crits. Right bar of the N is a little small and this fill is kinda sloppy, but overall i like the way it turned out