Some crits on this one liner would be cool.
Please, let the person giving the crits know what they're talking about.



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most people are...
i like that enemy oneliner,alot,but feeling the one or the addons,but the enemy hand itself is looking nice,go put it up.

 

The enemy oneliner is nice! I'd put more of an ass on that first E, though.

That first OKAE hand is sick, too.

Random word I started writing a few minutes ago.

 

Yeah, Nouv's got a point, that E could use more of a donk.

 

i disagree i think that e's the shit the way it is,it has wobbie sobbie homie.

 

So new name and stuff. been monitoring this thread and yeah.
Posting now.

Crits?

Which one?

 

what do you mean? theyre exactly the same

 

What should I write.
Yerp

Or Method


And crits for the name decision.

 

go back to simple letters^^


some old shit,really old shit actualy

 

smooth- sorry to tell ya, but theres an "okae" where im from who tears shit up...

 

....been over this before,i dont live any where near any of you herbs,so i do not give a fuck!

 

ok im as toy as can be. anyways here is my tag rip me apart

 

simple letters

 

word, that M looks like a crooked S connected to a 2. the P's look like question marks, and the I's are mad wack. just practice simples and your own style will come. it just takes time and practice.

 

Simpler.
Lost the first two letters. crits?

 

better,i dont like how your t and h connect so much

 

Is that good?
Or is it still crossing over horribly?