well i live in the US so i dont really think it matters too much if someone has the same name as me in canada as long as theyre not a king or anything. its pretty hard to come up with a name that no one uses anywhere these days
[Broken External Image]:http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/5854/imag0282o.jpg finally got around to finishing this. im real happy with the way it turned out, i think its a step in the right direction. crits anyone?
^......you took a step... but idk in what direction. Ima disregard the bar width cause its fucked in too many places to name them all. So just based on letters ima tell u what i aint like. Bottom left of N you got the bar curvin to the left and a little flip/extension goin to the left, and then top right of n u got the bar curvin to the left an extension goin left, when yuo should have made the right bar curving to the right with an extension at the top goin to the right. which woulda killed a good amount of negative space. Then, your O looks like a bad backwards D. the I in my opinion is the worst letter up there, u made it a lower case w/ a fucked up janky bar at the bottom that makes it look half upper and half lower case. You made your S curve until the very end where u put a random bar curving to the left looks weird. top of E is fine. the middle part should have been straight then bottom part should have been straighter as well. Lastly if you made your letters bars go at more convenient angles your 3d wouldnt look so bad, because u have the right idea w/ picking a light source point. most of this is easiar to draw then describe so pm or someone else if u want actual help
Uhmm Ribcage is tellin it like it is, which I respect, but you gotta remember this IS the Toy forum. Noise, you made a huge step in the right direction. I liked the colors, and your letters look a lot better now that you made those improvements from before. Rib was right about the bar width though, there is a couple places it was a LITTLE off, and I agree that the N would've looked better if the right side curved to the right. The I is ugly, just my honest opinion. I just don't like the I having those things at the bottom, even if it does kill a good amount of negative space. But all in all, it looks so much better. Keep it up. PS, work on your drips. It is hard to explain how to make em look better, but like make em different lengths and have some closer than others instead of so evenly spaced out. But yeah, good luck.
thanks dudes, appreciate the help. i had the bars all even but when i outline i always fuck em up, i just gotta work on that i guess and ribcage ill shoot you a PM
plain and simple right there good shit son luv the colors keep working on letter structure youll hav this shit down soon -CRIS
Keep that shit goin Noise, just connect the O it looks better you know? Work on that tag too.. a quick freestyle with this new steez im fuckin with..
gotcha mone, that piece is interesting, i dont like the M it doesnt flow well but the other 3 letters arent lookin bad. good to see youre tryin something different. safe thats sick. only thing i dont like is the top part of the A, especially the left bar, it looks too skinny to me. keep it up i like that background