flat-wack ass shit.... learn how to do a handstyle and also learn how to do a piece werm- ditch the thing in the W. Top of right bar, bottom of right bar on the R are wack. Top of S is also wack Skope- the top of both Es doesnt really flow with the rest. The clouds dont look to good
Vadr, a couple of those are really sick, reminiscent of local styles around here. Denie- not feeling the cloud i or the bump in the middle of the D Flat- you should do simps again with some sick color schemes, i think those would look good. Werm- im feeling it mostly, but those little extinsions do need fixing can i get crits on this?
AYO once upon a time i said "i only wanna do pieces!"... how toy i was... handstyle is everything... they are the building blocks for throwies pieces everything... just like how keyboard letters make simples.... and anyone can do a fancy fill and your cutoffs and random extensions make me angry... the way the cycle is suppose to go is handstyle throwies and then pieces... if you got calligraphy skip the first step... just felt like dropping knowledge cause 've watched so many graff videos and learned so much history bout newyork and my own city... know your knowledge before you play the game... before you comment on something really toy and say it is good... realize if ya wanna get better, know what better is... cause decent isnt enough to cut it... THIS IS A MESSAGE FOR ALL YOU NEW COMERS... you know who you are... no hate though
@sbal fix your bar width, especially on the circular part of the P and the E. Take your time sketchin out your bars, look at the A, the crossing part you made extending isnt on the right bar isnt at the right spot, it should be higher making it all 1 bar. And your shadow is off at some places
yo, you should try some constructive criticism instead of "wack ass shit" or "learn how to do a piece"... these dudes are here to learn and get advice from people who might have something worth saying. if i was posting up my stuff when i was first learning and someone simply told me this and that is wack, i'd think to myself 'ya, i know' then id probably tell you to fuck off! even if you're right about those things, its a pretty weak approach to helping these cats out! you were there once, were you not? i sure was, my shit fuckin sucked at first, but i was fortunate enough to have a few people point me in the right direction, which paid off, and i give props to them now. aside from that, you guys should forget about extensions of any sort for the time being. there's nothin wrong with havin some cool ideas that you might think will look good, and im sure they do when you picture them in your mind, but putting them on paper is another thing, and its best to master the basics before attempting to throw those ideas into your peices or straight letters. and also, use a pencil !!!! that way you can sketch your letters out and make adjustments easily without starting over, if you notice something looks off on one of your letters, take a look at your keyboard and check out the basics of how that letter is formed and fix that bad boy up! structure is everything, stick with it and you will be mad thankful that you didnt become an ignorant fuck who tried to rock shit that was far out of his league! cheers y'all View attachment 601487
@madekdga- i know what your saying dude. I mostly just said that cus Ive already told flat to work on his hands and go simple, so has everyone but hes still doing the same shit. I understand constructive criticism and sometimes i give good crits, sometimes im lazy and spend less time on them. It kinda depends on the person. Notice i specifically said which parts of the other two peoples pieces needed work. Its whatever ima do me @cheesedreams- definitely go simpler. idk what the first letter is supposed to be and the arrow coming off of it is wack. The P and U are the best. Go to the new to graffiti thread and look at some of the stuff about turning straight letters into pieces and shit. Use bars and maybe dont worry about doing the bg right now
yeah fair call, (it's an F btw) I don't really like pieces that much atm, mainly cause I'm shithouse at them, just like the ideas behind them really, as in I would almost consider them advanced sketches or planning for future blackbook stuff
Flat- work on your hands Wem- Diggin the R, the E looks like dookie Sbal- Your 3d and Bar consistency is off cheese_dreams- Shits ugly. Bite your keyboard Tempo- Yes I tried some new shit, Tell me what i should keep/scrap
mewn, keep basic letter structure and work from that, refine it till you can even out the bars on all the letters and make them consistent even in your sleep. scrap the arrow, the colors and the eyeball in the e, also sort the leading edge of the e out to get rid of that sharp point, looks a bit out of place also scrap the drop shadow as it is all over the place, compare front of the m with the bottom on the n, they arent even in the same hemisphere bud
Those things on your F look mega bad dude, just cut those off. Make your letters more balanced and less "I closed my eyes and tried to draw the letter in one stroke" looking. Work on your hand, a lot. The superfat second outline with an added third outline is just goofy looking. Anarchy is a flawed theory, control and authority are natural inevitabilities, as are the people that stray from them. I'd also say pull your P out a little bit more.
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thanks for all the crits on my work, I would like to eventually get better on putting letters together, I think I'll go back to pencils for a bit and work on that first