sorry to ruin the page of awesome flicks but i had to post my own.. [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011001.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/THURSDAY3RDMARCH2011010.jpg this is my last piece, i know the E is kinda fucked and with that fill i just thought it needed more detail after i finished it so i added that. CRITSSSSSSS????
first D is better than the second, top of E is lookin a little to fat. The O dont flow all that great with the rest either...and you already mentioned your fill mistakes. It looks a lot better than the last shit you posted tho
Really need to cut them lines kid..looks choppy as hell when u don't..use even back and forth strokes on yer fill too..and idk watthe hell u we're thinkin with that yellow line thru the fill.don't use the same colors in r fill as ur using for an outline..colors.blue fill white outline yellow shell.that's my 2and ahalf cents..and work on some simpler letters..all the same size..
good can control but you need to work on your theory a bit just practice on paper a bit more. and you'll be ready to hit them streets hard with no buffer time
Wow I haven't been on here in a hot minute.... but the most progression I've seen so far is my boy squint,lookin nice... ima post some of my new stuff...
[Broken External Image]:http://piczasso.com/i/uk6d9.JPG So damn sloppy, 3 is fucked too. Not proud of this but lookin for crits anyway. Youth, I like everything but the Y.
lookin good although couldn't you have found a bit of a dirtier wall than this, or like a public wall or something... this looks like too much damage to the owners of that house