Chumba- Thought that was a Z at first. Smoke- Half that shit in the gutter/ditch thing made me laugh. It's almost as bad as the shit in my town. You got a scene? Can I get some thoughts on this bullshit?
wow, bro. that's bad. you need to practice your flow. in other words, practice being uniform with your hands. make sure all of your letters are leaning in the same direction, 'cause your l and a are leaning against rather than with each other. also, your h is too small, while your s buttfucks it. now having small letters is alright at times, but you misused the technique. a big c, bigger l, small a, big and wide s, and a small and skinny h. the way it's composed is awkward. keep at it though, mah' *****'. And I'm not even get on a high horse and act like my hands are the sickest, 'cause I'm still practicing my flow too. But what I've learned over my 2years is letters in a hand shouldn't take too much space (Like your S), they should be relatively the same height and width. There are exceptions to this however. Those are the starting letter, and the ending letter. these can be wider than the rest, but they should remain the same length as the rest of the letters. [Broken External Image]:http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo247-1.jpg
^I can't quite make out the first letter, but I'm thinking that is more or less due to the photo quality. I like your style though. Wasn't feeling my other one at all. Simple one right here. I like the ones with the lowercase "r" more than the uppercase.
thats good practice mindtrix ian a guy on here developed pretty quick by repetitive trys like you have posted ... build off what you have small bend or curves nothing major just keep at it and you will develop
+1 for progression haven't posted up one of these in a while, what do you think of the halo/underline on the right side about halfway down until the bottom? I've been tryin to figure out what add ons would look good since the tag itself is somewhat plain. Pesoe tbh i think that tag would look a whole lot better without the last E, you kinda gotta nice symmetry thing goin and it just looks out of place IMO.
haha alright ill lose it then, and which lowercase letters? the lowercase n looks a lot better than an uppercase IMO, i like the uppercase E better though
View attachment 602646 View attachment 602647 View attachment 602648 View attachment 602649 View attachment 602650 View attachment 602651 dkode- i feel ur hand. like hekler said sum of the underlines dont work but that dont matter, ur letters are there. wilbur- work sumthin out between those two styles u posted and u'll be set ian- only thing i aint really feelin is the dot over the i, maybe elongate that for ur halo pesoe- i dont like the tops of the e's n s, makes the letters to complex
@seywhat that 1 liner is dope @Ian lowercase I looks weak, and you really like lower case N instead of upper case? Id have to disagree... @flawless you got a chisel tip? cause i think if your letters had some thickness too them i could crit them better... plus it makes the hand movement easiar to see yeaaaaa boooy View attachment 602671 same ol handy View attachment 602672
ahahahahahhah u diss my tags and then you post your own tags which are so much worse than mine. ive got way better tags then you and u got the nerve to say they suck, take a look at yourself.
Ohh hah alright, my bad. Ill reupload those pictures when I get on a computer I'm via mobile web right now. Change your whole handstyle. Pretty clean , on the 1st picture the only thing I didn't like was that E on the bottom & would stick with the 1st handstyle you did on the 1st pic. Give me feedback on my tag!! I've been waiting all night -.-
KEWR, creative tag, but ur trying too much. take a more eazy tag. it doesnt need lots of adds to make it look dope. and keep everything 1 style. thats my opinion ;d keep it up peace
New markers, and kewr i think your tag is a bit crazy and hard to read at a first glance but i can see you have the skill to make a nice tag its just practice i guess