if i were going to give crits i would say everyone needs to work on their letters

SENSE
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i wont lie, i like it... i jus think it needs to be cleaned up a bit, then itll be bangin

 

Safe tbh, those "S's" look like nothing but fog or smoke or something, they don't look anything like the letter S . The E's look off without a left bar too, the N is aight but that's about it

 

Ian - im lovin that throw on you're blackbook and the simple is pretty nice too. Your newest piece is good, but the O kinda looks like a U or a D. And the top left of your end should be connected imo.

Heres my newest thing im working on...just an E right now...

 

chyeah! right, and monkeys might fly outa my butt. ian, i'd like to battle you hahaha, i got beef lol, i dislike you giving me tips on my letters when you post the weakest letters right after. would you be down for a sketch battle? you could pick the word brotha

 

Bump?

 

Troll for the win

But Safe your letters are weaksauce man, no structure no nothing, It's abstract at best, not much else to say about it.

Noise - seems like you rushed it, take your time.
Kush - I like it but the little shading at the top doesn't help it.
Kweezy - Your letters need a little more work, the way your end bars is just weird sometimes.
Rezume - Those are dope, ink em up.

 

Heres some keyboard letters... pretty basic. Extremely new to graffiti, and got in trouble for not postin throwies, so, i guess imma be chillin here for a while ha

CC? Which one did you like best?

 

looks like a ballpoint freestyle to me, and look harder cause the letters are definetly there...

 

FRY do them bigger and dont even bother coloring them yet. use bars too

 

Mkay... what do you mean by bars?

 

safeway.. it kinda took me awhile to read that. you're S? first one looked like an A or a J. and the last looks like a D but was easier to figure out as an S for awhile.
idk.. i'm new to writing so maybe it's just me.

 

im appreciating all this feedback. i'll try n clean it up.

 

First attempt at anything beyond basic block.
advice???
yea i dont like the color or how the S or E are infront of everything else either.

 

You overlap letter weird so you can barely see some of them, the T is barely visible and half of the first E is covered up.

 

*update*

 

few flicks

 

Yea noticed that. Prob would have done the 3d so the s and e dont look like they are infront of everything else.

 

no more updates please, you don't need crits on every letter you do... it's a sketch, not the sistine chapel's ceiling
stop raiding the thread and we'll crit you on it once you post the whole thing
kthx