right in the middle between the o and s just take the top things on the left hand side and right had side of it off
mogan the only one on the last 2 pages with flow and actual skill...... flicks for talking [FLICKS>talk] just some shit i did today pages 773 and below were starting to make this shit look like a real thread
BUTS- kinda hard to crit cause its not my style but, IMO the only good "B" is on the first one, Your "U's" look pretty good. Your "T's" look like a Z to me. And like he^ said The "S's" makes some pretty dope "E's". Just an outline messin wit a diff style...
i agree, my first b is the best but i thought my u's were kinda lame, dont mind my zed T's or my e-looking S's, KRINGE - that second last letter is kinda wack but in all the peice still pretty good pretty much just drips on the other peice
YOU sir are in NO place to talk about flow.You also have shit for structure. Dick riding and hating on the internet doesnt make you any better. Go do some simples. Bump from the last page. roast-deff lose the extentions,and im not feeling how all your letters look smooshed down. Mippi-you have descent structure to your letters,i'd just so focus less on colors and highlights,and more on experimenting with ways to bend and shape your letters but still keep the orginal structure.All in all it's good,specialy if thatts your first piece.Simple.Like it should be.Keep it up.All i really dis like is the little block things around it.
don't write simer... big head on the east coast.. WAIT...that shit by KinkyStab says Buts? The B's look like E's, the T's look like Z's...I thought it was Euzs... I sure as hell don't see B's... Either way, the B's would make dope as fuck E's lolol
love it menace! we should do an exchange for sure mase those extensions are killing your piece for sure, i feel no flow in that shit there is already a SIMER who is a big east coast mother fucker, i suggest sticking with Miser KINKY I LOVE THAT STYLE!! What do you write exactly? buts or zute or zuts? can't make it out exactly... i'd want to exchange you tho for sure some steez i did for a friend on his paper with his markers, didn't turn out so well [Broken External Image]:http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/4299/04202011479.jpg