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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ATAK!:3

    ATAK!:3 Banned

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    just something i sketched up, please leave comments
     
  2. FlatScank

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    do you even paint?, and that goes to half the people in this thread, atleast I go out and put stuff up. Theres no such thing as King of the Papes ;)
     
  3. LeanOne

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    i painted for the first time yesterday night. im as toy as it fuckin gets. i post here so i can get help developing my style and so i can as good as i can. thats what this thread's for aint it ? i aint comin aggressive at you brother im totally humble. im just speakin my mind. eitherway we can take this to chat if you want. this is blackbook. so ima make this post legit.

    this was also for the MIND piece battle. the 3D is a flop and so is the D. any tips on the doing inside circles/shapes of O's D's P's etc ?

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  4. ATAK!:3

    ATAK!:3 Banned

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    allright, thanks. can you give me some pointers on this throwup... im sketching up some ideas for a bombing trip im planning
     
  5. CliffJackson

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    Is this red mash any good? wat should i do to make it better?
     

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  6. Hulk

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    crits please
     

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  7. ribcage

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    @cliff@atak bars, straight letters, use them. ready go. oh and if you dont know whats up with bars go to the new to graffiti thread.
     
  8. CliffJackson

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    Yo thanks ribcage for that advice. Can u explain the vanishing point a little more? Oh and thanks to phat2 for the tutorial.
     
  9. LeanOne

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    ATAK & MASH/CLIFFJACKSON - first things first, you gotta try and make each letter the same size, otherwise they look outta proportion and it wont flow too good. im suprised someone hasnt already said the phrase ''KEYBOARD LETTERS!!!!'' so i will. this basically means, look at your keyboard, and write out your tag in block capitals, keeping them all the same size, just like your keyboard.
     
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  10. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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    Flat I would rather look at someone's blackbook that has good letter structure and style than look at a really clean yet wonky ass style painted piece. Just saying homie, you got good can control the only thing really holding you back is your refusal to listen to others.

    Will have some new shit up soon I hope
     
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  11. CliffJackson

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    Looking a little better, tried to make everything go to the vanishing point. It still looks a little off.
     

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  12. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    advice.jpg simpler bro this is what he means when he says work on bars and stuff which you need to get down before you start worrying about #-D and vanishing point this wud be cleaner but i rushed on it so this is just to give you a general idea
     
  13. ribcage

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    A is a little squished in there and i fucked up outlining the C to H connection but whatev. crits? colors?
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    after lookin at it in a pic i noticed all the dead space inbetween the c and h as well...3d will take up some of it
     
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  14. LeanOne

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    ribcage im feelin it, the middle of the E covers too much of the left bar on the A imo.
     
  15. ribcage

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    yeamp i had to squeeze that in there after i mistakenly went to far with the outline on the middle of the E
     
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  16. ATAK!:3

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    anyone have any tips on doing k's?
     
  17. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    Just drew this out, simple ass letters.
     
  18. pez 1794

    pez 1794 Member

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    Dank - Looks pretty sweet to me. Nothing bad that I can find.

    Any crits before I ink it?
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  19. dankbudz

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    Try and make all the letters the same size. The "S" and the "Y" seem too big in comparison to the rest. And next time try and not overlap the letters, its not a bad thing, but in this one it doesn't look like it has much purpose, looks forced.
     
  20. ATAK!:3

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