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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    EWL24 - try working on that G a little more

    still fucking simples, my S's are so inconsistent.
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  2. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    on the top 1 your D is slightly leaning to the right... looks weird
     
  3. Shroomsh

    Shroomsh Senior Member

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    cheers ribcage, umm ive been tested and they tell me that its my blue cone (receptor) that is fucked but then they went on to tell me that it affects other colours like reds and shit.. cant remember exactly.. i can still see colours and growing up with it your constantly told what colours are what.. so i can match up colours with names, i just dont see them the same as everyone else. or something like that..
    ive heard some pretty good things about prisma too, i was thinking of getting the full set of molotow graffics markers for like $150 or what ever they cost.

    @angrytofu, i cant even see where your letters are.. and i can see you worked pretty hard on it, but tbh its not that great. it lacks structure and flow, which are the two most importat things when it comes to graffiti.. at this level anyway.. the best of the best such as members of msk and tmd can often get away with having no structure. but their flow is impecable which makes up for it.. and they have all been writing for 15 years plus.

    @sen, your most recent post looks good with the white highlights but, i would have to say.. pencil is no good, you cant really ever get a clean colour with pencils unless their an expensive brand, and yours looks like it was coloured with crayola pencils. as for structure. your letters are decent, they need a bit of work but that comes with experience.. keep posting

    @task, i like the dragon c: the piece needs a bit of cleaning up though, the outline looks a bit wobbly
     
  4. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    you lookin at sets online or what? Molotow graphics got a pretty good color selection from what ive seen in pictures but i never used em in action... the whole set looks waaay to chunky to be only 150 bucks
     
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  5. MASE P_2s

    MASE P_2s Senior Member

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    for my beef battle with sick- but he chickened out =[ crits?
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  6. SCRAPE

    SCRAPE New Member

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  7. PermanentMarkers

    PermanentMarkers Senior Member

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    I like it, but it feels wrong. I think its the 3D at the top of your G. Its wronggggggg... like so wrong, ruins the whole thing imo. I think you could have added an extension to the top of the E to make it more like your S as well. Looking at the 3D more, it looks like you tried perspective 3D on some parts and then just gave up on perspective for the others.... would have looked way better if you carried the perspective through. Quickie in paint.. (fuck paint)

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    SGRYPE or SGROPE?? Doesnt flow too well
     
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  8. The Gyko Gecko

    The Gyko Gecko New Member

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    Ok so I'm new here and I wanna get something out first. I'm below a toy. Like there's toys then there's me. I wanna get better so I really need crits on these. Again they are bad, I know, I just need some harsh criticism on them.
     

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  9. MASE P_2s

    MASE P_2s Senior Member

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    thanks bro ill keep all that in mind next time and yea i know the top of the g was killing me when i was trying to figure out the 3d
     
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  10. extinct

    extinct Senior Member

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    yo scrape thats pretty funk ish you got goin... space them letters out better...
    yo law... that style is pretty fresh.. paint em sketchs
     
  11. FlatScank

    FlatScank Banned

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    @Scrape: thats dope, paint it.
    @ Gyko, your 3rd flick down is your best, but thats not really saying anything, work on bars, and after awhile you can bend them to make them look correct, also, all your letters should be around the same height (Relating to your 3rd flick

    Crits please.
     

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  12. chiefy

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  13. nah!

    nah! Banned

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    the c's way too fat
     
  14. pointman

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    Scrape- loving your style in both
    Norf- funky colours, looking good!

    random shit, big coverage ideas
     

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  15. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    yo no hate, but maybe take your own advice bud...
     
  16. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    yo, i second what TastyMcnasty said

    starting to color this, i gotta add something with the eye. also might put a piece in there, not sure yet.
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  17. SicK-

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  18. Nemo2

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    The first two peices Ive properly made an attempted :)
    Any tips on how I can make this better?
     

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  19. Lukys7en

    Lukys7en New Member

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    Quick in class drawings
    Any ideas?
     
  20. nah!

    nah! Banned

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    thats mad wild

    and not in a good way