Flat, try and make all of your spines on your letters like your F, not at different angles. Your L is too far back, and it and the T look like Z's
I'm sayin you should use it. it's a great throw A, and it definitely goes nice with your shit man. I know you might not like using other people's letters, but I think you should at least give it a shot on paper, who knows you might like it. besides biting one letter is fine imo, it's no big deal, especially if you play around with it until you make something fo your own out it. you know? use it as a base. it's a very good one. Meko and co. enough with that shit plz. thx
the angles is not the problem, they r fine. actually the l a t are kinda good except their stupid extensions. f is just a fag letter in general. but man work your fills!! they are horrible as always!
^^ quit hatin on dude yeah his shit needs work all of our shit needs work give legit crits and explanations. Rather than trying to be a funny guy toys hatin on other toys just make you a super toy. I just dont think anyone that belongs in the toy forum should be critting other writers unless it is constructive. Thats why you have 2 ears and 1 mouth talk less and listen more.
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@Ian: This is why it's worth more painting than sketching, even though my letters are wack, I can do something that clean and looks half decent, painting is different from sketching, the more you actually paint, the cleaner/better your work will come out, the only good flick you posted was your throw.
haha thanks for keepin it real my dudes, I'm not happy with anything i've done so far but its all about practice, and flat i know what youre sayin but clean painting and bright colors are not what graffiti is about, i'd much rather see a black and white piece with good letters than something with terrible extensions and form with a loud colorful fill
first bomb in a long time i mean a long time that why i'm posting here. please let me know what yall think. more flicks soon.
Bor - The B and the O are good but the R's legs are indented a bit at the bottom, make them more flat. I have garbage can control and I cant get the proportions right. On top of that I never use my left index finger so its hard to keep the cap all the way down. What can I do to fix this? Im running out of black so all I can paint is hollows [Broken External Image]:http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9666/dsc00009qb.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1207/dsc00010vb.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us
dope E. i like that strait letter to. just remember to keep ur letters concistant. like the e dips down alot lower than the s. etc.. bor its just generic man. just need to develop ur style more
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Pokering, you have fucking Belton? Get some dollar cans and save the good shit for later. Check the new to graff thread.