not really feelin that skina the i is mad generic try switchin up your style see what happens seems like your forcin the letters that way because all your letters have that hole the a n and k always look like the same letter
i feel ya ill just stick to my old one it seems like its the best one i do haha and for your crit im seeing maaaaaaaadddddd progress keep it up the first E is too hidden the rest is fine but the O try making it more like a character insted of just a face ya digg? Or make it flow a bit more like the P and see what happens btw i can make your throw a oneliner ahhaha i just tried it
start over kron go to the new to graff thread and do a little research on throws before you get started.... Skina yea I use to do a 1 liner on my name before I added the e at the end tried making the bottom of the o like a rag but idk think the checker stripes are too much any1 have any simple details that would make it look more legit ?
yes alot of crits but im not going to write all of them now letter dont flow try simp letters then but miny add ons to make them look like throws i did it al look at all my throws there one of the best in the toy throw forums IMO
Thoughts? Just a simple bomb. EDIT: I know the lines and circles are uneven. Just a quick sketch of my idea.
please dont go bombing if this is what you are putting up.. for crits, if you are going to have no space in the ISH, then i would just use a line as the whole in the O. Push those letters closer and work on a steadier hand.
isho, my ***** as strongly as i encourage you to go bombing tonight, despite what your peers say (that practice is critical to progression,) that throw is wack. [Broken External Image]:http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/1254/photo00001j.jpg this is basically your throw, but with some CW help. i strongly recommend you bite the shit out of this. also, when you go to paint, move with your letters. dont just stand still and move your arm at the shoulder, but sway with your letter. and if you have the chance, take a few steps back and look at your throw before you "bounce." see what youve done wrong and take note on what needs improving. theres no reason you cant improve that very next throwy that you do 1-5-whatever minutes from now. dont get caught. edit: and, no, im not saying my throw is perfect.
CHADWARDEN in that throw you did your I looks like a dick your S looks like an ass the H looks like 2 asses mashed togehter and that O looks like an ass. ISHO don't use that, also practice man you'll get there. but get good then paint don't make your town hate graffiti more then it already does by putting up ugly shit, also all the local heads will think your wack as fuck. Don't take offence im just saying. i popsted this before but it was small heres it bigger left one has key lime force feild you cant see it tho in this photo i guess