Exact- looks sick, i would lower those 2 bars on the X and A. colored this in, i hate how the coke looks like gore.
you clearly got drawing and painting in themselves down, but you really gotta work on letter structure. doesnt mean you gotta drop the style, just hit up simples and see how that helps, because that piece could easily be mistaken as SZB. its a streatch, cause you can distinguish the F with the middle bar and tell its an A simply because the lower extension isnt connecting, but its the fact that your extensions are so big. In some places the extensions bigger then the bars of the letter itself, and the fact that they are placed in areas which could make it into a different letter, like the L, makes it turn into a Z. Hope you take some of this to hear cause ive seen people tell you to make your stuff simpler and you continuously would paint the same piece but with a different extension. Extensions arent everything, they can look hella sick, or gay as fuck.
^^^ you just wasted a lot of time typing that. EVERYONE has been telling him his letters are wack and he needs to drop his extensions.... so he adds more extensions and rounds the edges of his letters instead of keeping them sharp like he has been doing. obviously he can paint, and he gets up (even though they are all legals) so respect for that i guess, but he's going backwards in terms of progressing. im sick of him asking for crits, he needs to start saying "hop on my dick if you like it, dont post if you dont". not trying to hate, but as much as flat and as good as he is at painting, his shit be sooooo fire if he'd listen to the dudes on here.
It's a nice style if you dont give a shit what people think it says. I got S2A or SZB/A I never suspected FLA if that's what it is. There's too many extensions that make it look like multiple letters. I cant tell you what to do because your skill surpasses mine but if you want crits I'd say make your letters more distinguishable. Anyone got anything to say in regards to the two I posted?
they looking good, i didnt look to much at them, got bars and structure, keep it up i just wouldnt do brown fill on black 3d, haha
Anyone that can help me with handstyle I really need it. Anyone wanna give me something for inspiration? I write MAK if anyone can help. And thanks for the advise. They were my only two markers so I was kinda hapy with it. The flash made it darker than it is lol
I like it a lot, but the one thing I can find is that your S kinda resembles a B. Otherwise its a dope piece. And are your 3D's supposed to be inconsistent?
haha i loled at that that second part, ace.k not sure if it was a joke though... Hulk- try and keep bar width consistent and work on the U S and T. mainly S and T.
^^ its like the blind leading the blind... not to be offensive (especially because my skills arent too great), but that DUST piece is wack... to begin, the extensions and connections should be saved until you are of a higher skill level, equal bar width is non-existent, 3D is waayyy off the S doesnt look like and S at all it looks more like a B (like ACEK said), and most importantly structure seems to be completly lacking in that piece... like i said not trying to be a dick just trying to help, so take the advice and start simple and you'll be on your way... peace EDIT: i guess its kinda like the almost-blind leading the blind now haha
you dont gotta apolgize for shit you made, brah. but i forgive you. the D is your best letter, then the U, then the S, and that T is beyond shit. no hate. haha. and Tasty got you with the whole extensions and shit. if you are honestly looking to progress and arent too in love what you have been doin, you gotta say fuck it and really work on letters. draw hella simples, same bar width, same height, on one line. the simpler the better untill you honestly know why you are doing what you are doing. oh and that is lookin alot better then the first thing you posted.
@Dust, yeah, the second sketch is better than the first, but that's really not saying much. First off, they're practically the same, and you have to start switching it up more than that if you ever want to improve. Don't look at the first sketch when you draw the next, or else you end up with the same exact connections and letter shapes. Actually, drop the extensions and add-ons all together. You really need to go back to square one and work on your letter structure before you should be thinking about complexity. Try to keep the letter heights and widths consistent. The T is too tall and the U is much narrower than the rest of the letters. Also your 3D is atrocious. On the second sketch, it seems to be going down and to the left in most places, except for the very left part of the D where it goes to the right, and you left it out on the entire bottom of the piece. It also looks like the top of the S is mooning someone up there. These are just crits, and I'm no pro, but take 'em or leave 'em.
i cant crit much, other then the circle as the middle bar on the A. fucking around during photography i reaaallly gotta get a phone again or camera or something, this computer cam fucking blows.