To each his own. But I don't want to argue since it flares debates like no other. On with the sketches!
ribcage- thats quite unfortunate. there is a easy way to solve that though... draw some shiiit yeah im with ace, fuck internet beef.
don't really piece or whatever any crits welcome word. don't mind the shitty coloring also just noticed the lighter was right there
@Shroomish, Looks good man. It might be a little over the top in some places, but I'm digging the style and I like the Z and the S a lot. I don't like the E and the R quite as much but they're not bad. This would look awesome on a wall. @Gnar, Not too bad. The left side of the G is a little odd shaped. The N is funky but I like it, and I like the A too. I can definitely see some style in these letters. The R isn't bad either, just keep working with them if you don't like them. I found them tricky at first but now they're probably my favorite letter. Your bar height is consistent, and so is your letter height and width. Pushing the letters closer together would help with the flow, and throwing some 3D or drop shadow on would finish it off. Keep it up, you're on the right track.
Try drawing straighter lines and keeping your letters the same width throughout. A couple of them are wider at the top than at the bottom. That would help your 3D look better too. The O is the best letter, but the 3D is a off on the right side.
make the N's the same, fix the O, fix the middle and bottom of the E, and remove the extension on the Y and fix the right also. i would say stick to simples a while longer here a sketch for talking quickie while barely studying for math final, experimenting and shit, the D doesnt flow, but eh. tear this shit apart with crits.
^None of that "flows" the top of the R is out of place, the A's top bar is deformed making the A deformed, and the D aint all that bad of a D except the top right corner of the straight vertical bar i has pencil sketchs but they all unfinished, starting on an exchange for nesa, may put pics later, may not lol algebra
tombie- some are better, stop doing that weird shit with the E's middle bar. its either smaller or equal length. ribcage- thanks for them crits man, i feel like im slowly improving on making my letters flow, but thats probably me just bein dumb. and yes... algebra, i hate math. its not my strong suite.
@dankbudz i like the R and D but i think u could have done better on the A didnt get any crits on this last time, but now that i colored it i figured i post it up again crits please
keep your bars the same width, and do it like GETH also on that character usually the flat part on the eye would be where the eye lid would be, so it kinda looks wonky. hands and feet are decent just needs minor work, if you are trying to improve that, just practice drawing your own hands. for characters it just takes alot of doodling random things
@Geth, your 3D is really hurting in places, especially the top of the H, the inside of the G, and the entire E. Make sure you keep your bar width consistent. The bars on the E are so much narrower than the T, and the H is like that too. In some cases it's alright to have different widths, but here it's not working too well. The T also kills the flow of the GE because it's so thick and wide, and this piece would probably work better without it. Stay simple and keep working on that structure.
im 22 now, and started painting at 16...i stoped at 19 cus i got caught in a yard and got 3 years probation, so i stoped everything graffiti related, but now i started again... here is some old shit and some new shit