thas wassup rib, look a lil different from ur others?

 

yeah i guess, looks like my simps mostly, xcept the A and R, I gotta go to work on the E and C, especially the C lol

T to E connection is bad, bar width on the top crossing bar of the T is inconsistent. All your extenisons on this one are bad, but the only ones that have potential are the ones on the E cause their the only ones that make sense. You gotta learn what extensions make sense and what extensions dont make sense(like the one on top of your O and others...). Also you need to learn where to end some of your bars, Like where the 2 bars meet to make the hole in the middle of your P cut that extra part off at the point and make it look flat still but not enlongated ya digg?

 

@Tempo - rib basically covered everything. your o looks like a d though. It looks really forced. I dont know, just put some music on, smoke some pot or drink something (or both), and just try to go with the flow of the letters, your body, and the music. I don't know lol. Loosen up. Hope that helps.

Exchange for Atak. Tried new style. I definately need better control, so I'm gonna stick to simps for a while. Also really shitty blurry photo (my camera sucks).

crits welcome.

 

Easy there bro, it's really not that good. Not saying it's bad, but it's just extremely simple. Nothing to get hard for.

@Tempo, Man you should go way simpler. Your letter structure is decent at best and you really need to work on your flow before you get carried away with extensions and add-ons.

@Erk, I don't have much to say. It's mostly good but keep working with those letters because it lacks consistency in some places.

@NouveauP, I guess there's a few things here and there that I would tweak, but overall it's pretty tight. Good looks and hopefully Alyce will return the favor somehow.

@Atak, Man you need to go back to square one. Go back to doing simples. And I mean extremely simple. Right now your letters are inconsistent and have absolutely no flow. Your bar widths are all different, and the C is almost painful to look at. You should lose the arrows until you are good enough to incorporate them into the piece without overdoing it and actually know how to draw them. Don't worry about connecting your letters; you're not there yet. That's something that will come with time and practice, so keep pounding out simples until you understand the nature and flow of the letters. Once you're that you can start thinking about making it more elaborate.

@Keanu, I've given crits to you before. I like it but I'd make the E bigger and the A smaller. Apart from that it's not bad.

@ribcage, That sketch is looking solid. It has consistency and flow. Color it soon, I want to see the final result.

@Brer, I see mad potential in that sketch, and it's not even your usual word. I'd like to see the finished product if you plan on adding more to it.

 

So many good sketches in this thread,

repost for talking

 

tried tp make it simpler, camera sucks ass, as usual.

 

Atak- you gotta start practicing real simples, like "ATAK", same bar width same height, no extension/connections and er thang. yeah thats a simple, but its pretty weak

 

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i haven't posted here in a while, some new shit i got to lazy to finish. as always.

 

^uuuhhhn thas tight, you pwease do this thread a favor and post more

havent erased pencil yet... boutta beef them lines up and slap some 3d on it and call it a night
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quick sketch sry bout the 3d just got lazy with it! critts

 

^not too bad, you know how you made a point a flat edge on the top of the left most bar of N(the one thats part of the E) you should do that on the right bottom point of the D

messed up on the E C and H..... I like the letters tho so after i put 3d on ima do this 1 on a different page and color it there instead of wastin colors on theese 1
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@Rib - I think the top of the R is kind of off the theme since its sharp when the rest of it is smoother. Just sayin.

 

@tempo-go alittle more simple till you get letter structure down
@rib-try and even out ur hard and soft corners to even it out

 

started to fill in the outline wit green got mad and began scribbling all over it before I crumpled it up. then I said o well fuk it. so here leave it as is over there. i need a bite a grub..

 

@ace-k i think the C is too round at the top, and thats what doesnt fit

 

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okay going for more keyboard type letters, crits?