I know the Z is too short but it's my first time messing with paint pens at all and it was late as fuck when I did it. This shows what I'm using here for my new "Paint Pen Blackbook" haha which is one of those Benjamin Moore color swatch things. The top piece is a clear plastic so it was hard to work on but the rest are like a matte finish heavy paper so it works really well and it's cool to have a different background color for each one I do haha (although the pages are a bit slippery for the paint pens but maybe that's just something I gotta get used to...)
Outs- The TS is tight, make the U seperate more from the O, and rework that face. phat- the K doesnt flow well, but the AC is down, and its a highway spot so who gives a fuck My T's too small, and my U is gay. Says Debut
Yeah man, that could use some work all around. The extension on the D is pretty bunk, the E is bland compared to the other letters, and then it looks like a whole new font on the next three letters with the pointed bottoms. Keep workin on it.
Thanks man Bumping it cause it was the last on the page... I know the Z is too short but it's my first time messing with paint pens at all and it was late as fuck when I did it. View attachment 26652 This shows what I'm using here for my new "Paint Pen Blackbook" haha which is one of those Benjamin Moore color swatch things. The top piece is a clear plastic so it was hard to work on but the rest are like a matte finish heavy paper so it works really well and it's cool to have a different background color for each one I do haha (although the pages are a bit slippery for the paint pens but maybe that's just something I gotta get used to...) View attachment 26653
I appreciate it homie. Your name is always so fun to write. I got really experimental with this throw. Definitely went overboard, but it makes my eyes hurt [in sort of a good way], so I'll let you guys tear it apart.
yeee nouv got throws fo daaays, the only thing I can see is that A to U part might be hard to pull off w/ paint if your usin a fat to outline fuck Z's I hate em on throws... Nouv you got Z's? @hipe yo looks like your starting to get your hand movements down your E's are lookin good
I'll play with them every now and then. But yeah Z's, X's, and Q's kinda fuck me up. I wrote ZERO to demo a Z EVOW - the VOW isn't bad. It's kinda lumpy. That V could be tighter. The W has an interesting form to it, but something about the right side of the letter throws me off. And the drooping that your throw is doing isn't really working. And that E.... Oh that E... It doesn't matter if you take crits or not, ANYONE with an eye for letters will think you're toy if you rock that E. Just trust me. Keep it in mind, but scrap it. Maybe there's a similar solution you can find,but it needs work either way.
We just try to help Evow, but you're just acting stuck up and arrogant. And why not battle? Because "real" writers fight it out? That makes you a better fighter, not a better writer. Pic for talking. Trying out some char's with my throw and I'm diggin this flat top dude. Crits/thoughts are welcome. @ Hipe make it Morse.
nouv word is morse set it up homie aci the c is nice the middle of the e is weird and there is potential in your character but he needs a hairline everyone will tell you not to use characters for now though, I like using them myself some letters just seem boring well atleast my letters lol
I've tried that, but I can't get it to keep with the uniformity of the A and C. I'll keep trying though.
you arent much smarter, ACE Edit: another deleted post by ace.... lol Evow- if anyones liking your E then they are fuckin dumb, that letter looks full retard. its like a T, E and L all in one. also that bottom right of the W is quite fat and funky, but thats all my opinion, take it or leave it. the throw is clean beans though.
No I delete the useless talk. I never delete flicks. You said the E was original, yeah. But that's it. It's still cluttering the board. Flicks>talk
your name was moto? I'd raise the O a bit higher so that it aligns with the two outside bars of the M also if you wanna do a 2 letter throw, maybe it's a better idea to write MT instead